1) Refer to the link:
http://www.syrnia.com/index.php?page=manual&manual=adv_begin
Under the topic:
Island of Remer
Now that you are familiar with the playing screen it's time to get to know the game it self a little better.
It should be one word- it self changed to itself
2) Refer to the link:
http://www.syrnia.com/index.php?page=manual&manual=adv_begin
Under the topic:
Island of Remer
From Isri you move further to the right and you find the market city of Eully. Here you can trade items to other players at the Trading Post, put items up for auction at the Cave of Trades or bid on items. You can buy and sell basic items at the market as well if you're really short on GP or need to replace a piece of equipment. You can also meet Bluebell here and begin several quests for her. (See Quests or Magic for more details).
In front of the word: Bluebell, the word: Witch, should be added.
3) Refer to the link:
http://www.syrnia.com/index.php?page=manual&manual=adv_begin
Under the topic:
Island of Remer
The last and final stop on the tour of Remer Island is Port Senyn, here you can fish using a small fishing boat. You can catch Pike, Cod or Salmon once you have the correct fishing levels. For 20gp you can set sail for Dearn Island or for 50gp once you have enough levels you can enter The Outlands. However if you have a boat of your own, you can travel to most places in Syrnia for free! The larger the boat, the faster you can sail to a location.
Refer to the sentence: The larger the boat, the faster you can sail to a location.
'The larger the boat' should be changed to 'The higher level the boat'
Easier to understand.
4) Refer to the link:
http://www.syrnia.com/index.php?page=manual&manual=adv_begin
Under the topic:
Island of Remer
A Warning!: The Outlands is where you can fight other players and can be killed by them. You can train any skill here with low times, but at high risk. In order to protect new players, you cannot enter this dangerous place unless you have 60 Total Skills or a Combat Level greater than 5.
Refer to the sentence: You can train any skill here with low times, but at high risk.
'low times' should be changed to 'low timers'
5) Refer to the link:
http://www.syrnia.com/index.php?page=manual&manual=adv_begin
Under the topic:
Inventory
To the top-left of your screen is your inventory. These are the items you have in your possession. You begin the game with the following: Beginners horse, a Bronze Dagger, a Bronze Pickaxe, a Hammer, a Net, a Tinderbox, and a Bronze Hatchet. When you click these items, you will equip/un-equip/use/eat them.
Refer to the sentence: When you click these items, you will equip/un-equip/use/eat them.
I'm not sure how to change it, but 'these items' and 'equip/un-equip/use/eat them' sounds confusing.
Edited on 28-05-2019 11:09