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Hazgod [-TL-]
OK, loads of typos/spelling mistakes/grammar mistakes/space before exclamation marks have been fixed.

The other thread has become very cluttered so I am making this new one, which I will be able to keep on top of.

Mistakes will be fixed as they are added on here and I will edit your thread when the change has been made. It will then be uploaded by M2H, probably within a couple of days.

A few notes:
City names can't be changed easily, they are case sensitive so can't even upper case the first letter of each word.

Item names are in the database so I can't change stuff like "Looks like an animal hid some seeds in the tree, you got 1 Carrot seeds." The item is called Carrot seeds, I can't make that say 1 carrot seed. Same goes for x cooked shrimps. The item is called cooked shrimps.

Item names and city names CAN NOT BE CHANGED
MissTree [tag]
Could you not change it to "cooked shrimp(s)"? So it can be both plural and singular? :3 Rather than just "shrimp" or "shrimps"? Then you wouldn't need 2 names for it.
Shattered []
You have a total of 10000.00 premum points.
This is in the amount donated section.
Live life. Stay happy :)
InFrAtRaCe [JADED]
Rose Gates - When moving to castle rose.

"Castle rose gaurd"
Buying 5k Copper Ore! [W] or Msg!<br /> <br /> -= You found 1 Four leaf clover while walking ! =-<br /> InFrAtRaCe
barun511 [+DIE+]
You have not have all the items you need for this spell;
Enjoy the signature and avatar :) Regards The Donation Fairy.<br /> <br /> Defence level: 27 (111111 exp, 8050 for next level)<br /> <br /> <br /> [W]06:16 Antichrist[~FaM~]: you know, you really need to make your name easier to type
Burnt Cod [Pog]
You have 112 Bronze bars, you have 52 Copper ore and Tin ore left.

shouldn't it be...

You have 112 Bronze bars, you have 52 Copper ore and 0 Tin ore left.

?
NateHarper [~SaS~]
not a spelling mistake as such, but when we were going in the battlemage yesterday it still said about being able to take raws etc in to cook, which has been disabled for now.
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Thor [~SaS~]
on random ol spots it says maving to ol 'number' go on go look, only happens now and then tho so take your time out there :: )
Alex [O.G.]
You unlocked your Locked moldy chest and gained 125 thieving experience! Lockpick

Remove the 'Lockpick' word?
Tazz [Cyber]
At the start of the Magic table in the manual there is a "<".
[1]03:08 Ardarel[Tazz]: Oh, Tazz, I'm your biggest fan! &lt;3<br /> <br /> The Captain Keelhail struck at Tazz and did 76 damage. 0/60<br /> First player captured.<br /> <br /> Tazz struck and dealt 21 damage to the Deep sea monster.
Makeshift [Choob]
"This ogre camp has got some anvils you could find usefull...
The ogres also got a jail here."

to

"This Ogre camp has a few anvils you may find useful. The Ogres also have a jail here."
Makeshift[Choob]: I'm on a roll! Two days in world and not even a warning :D<br /> (Mod)Moderator: Awards Makeshift a 2 Day Trophy!<br /> <br /> [W]14:56 DeSoRDoR[Snake]: Shoop da whoop is stup- BLLAAAARRGHGH!~!!
Makeshift [Choob]
Just a comma...

"Elven gate guard: "Ok human your gate pass is valid, you can go through.""
to
"Elven gate guard: "Ok, human. Your gate pass is valid, you can go through."
Makeshift[Choob]: I'm on a roll! Two days in world and not even a warning :D<br /> (Mod)Moderator: Awards Makeshift a 2 Day Trophy!<br /> <br /> [W]14:56 DeSoRDoR[Snake]: Shoop da whoop is stup- BLLAAAARRGHGH!~!!
Pendragon [Color]
Just some small things that I saw at Endarx.

Change

Welcome to Endarx,
feel free to use our anvils like many generations before you did.This town has provided anvils for the best smithers of Syrnia!
Here you can also melt your ores into bars , which you can smith to many things like : armour, weapons, tools and more..
Although our furnaces can only heat up enough to smelt bronze and iron bars.

to

Welcome to Endarx!
Feel free to use our anvils like many generations before you did. (Space between did. and This) This town has provided anvils for the best smiths of Syrnia!
Here you can also smelt your ores into bars, which you can use to smith many things, such as : armour, weapons, tools, and more..
However, our furnaces only reach a temperature high enough to smelt bronze and iron bars.

Edited on 24-10-2011 22:12
Makeshift [Choob]
@Pendragon
Shouldn't 'Although' be 'However' ?
Makeshift[Choob]: I'm on a roll! Two days in world and not even a warning :D<br /> (Mod)Moderator: Awards Makeshift a 2 Day Trophy!<br /> <br /> [W]14:56 DeSoRDoR[Snake]: Shoop da whoop is stup- BLLAAAARRGHGH!~!!
Fiery [Zen]
The ogres have survived for a long time in this cave because of their gold mines. They have always been trading their gold for resources they could not get inside their cave. But these days a lot of humans plunder the gold mines, the ogres hate the humans for it.

The ogres that dwell in this cave survive because of their gold mines. For centuries they have been trading their valuable gold for resources they could not produce themselves in their cave. However, these days the skilful humans plunder the gold mines whilst the ogres are busy fighting.

I always thought that ogre towns should be written in "Ogah" though. For example, 'like' would become 'liek' as ogres have little education with English.
Life is just a breath of fresh air. <br /> <br /> You can choose to inhale and live life to its fullest and be remembered.<br /> Or you can choose to ignore life and die forgotten.<br /> <br /> Life is too short for foolery.
Someone [Vital]
On the "Lost Password" pages, address is spelt 'adres'. This is not correct.
Cornflakes [-DRS-]
While fishing, you caught a Leather boots!

Surley it should be...

While fishing, you caught a pair of Leather Boots!
Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.<br /> <br /> Woodcutting level: 26 (100020 exp, 4870 for next level)
Kamira [-DRS-]
Ten Cliff:

"The cliffs surrounding the town have been home to the mightly smithers of Skull island for many generations. They are always welcoming new aspiring smithers to learn from the best by letting everyone use their smelters and anvils."

Mightly = Mighty.
Smithers = Smiths.

Also, as a minor concern, change smelters to something? Furnace perhaps?

Extra Stats Screen:

"You bought a total of 90 casino chips.
You sold a total of 0 casino chips."

You have bought a total of 90 casino chips.
You have sold a total of 0 casino chips.

Hook's Edge:

"A old trading post can also be found here."

A = An.

Reply to above comment: Address is the bestest spelling.


Hawk Mountain:

"An ancient pirate story about a hawk with metallic wings, lead pirates to this mountain, in search for metal to make weapons from."

Lead = Led.

Last Edit: Looking at Silver and Gold ore's names; they're exactly that. Should Silver be Silver ore? It is possible to change?

Edited on 25-10-2011 14:18
Joh [~TLO~]
I believe this is automated, and not a mods grammar mistake.

An support ticket has been created about your player account. Please read and reply the ticket.

"A support ticket has been created..." feels more natural.
JackGrimm [Crypt]
Moderator edit:
Corrected adres and adress everywhere

Isnt it address?
Reply from 85.17.238.144: bytes=32 time=44595ms TTL=48<br /> <br /> 0 Jack the Reaper missed 1000/1000 - The Captain Keelhail <br /> <br /> [6]07:44 (Mod)Moderator: Jack the Choober <br /> <br /> Joined: September 14, 2008 - 13:40
Uzumaki [Choob]
Moving to Hooks edge takes you 89 seconds you will gain no experience because you are using the Mule.

Shouldn't it be "a Mule"?
If you really want something in this life, you have to work for it - Now quiet, they're about to announce the lottery numbers!<br /> <br /> Operator! Give me the number for 911!
Tazz []
You stole 0 gold from xxx

Probably should be "You successfully thieved xxx but got no gold" or something
[1]03:08 Ardarel[Tazz]: Oh, Tazz, I'm your biggest fan! &lt;3<br /> <br /> The Captain Keelhail struck at Tazz and did 76 damage. 0/60<br /> First player captured.<br /> <br /> Tazz struck and dealt 21 damage to the Deep sea monster.
Tazz [Cyber]
John Friddik tells you: What... I can't come over?
It's always the same ....He forgets to cook for 2, then uses the same lame excuse every time 'I haven been able to cleanup my house'..
Ah well, I guess he asked you to bring me some food instead ?
Thanks for that though

Probably should be "I haven't been able to cleanup my house"



Edit for mod: Both are accepted ;)

Edited on 30-10-2011 03:39
[1]03:08 Ardarel[Tazz]: Oh, Tazz, I'm your biggest fan! &lt;3<br /> <br /> The Captain Keelhail struck at Tazz and did 76 damage. 0/60<br /> First player captured.<br /> <br /> Tazz struck and dealt 21 damage to the Deep sea monster.
xxlostsoulxx [JADED]
"Defense" is spelled wrong. It is spelled DefenCe in the game. The C should be a S.
Sheep [1-Sec]
Can be either lostsoul, neither are incorrect. They are two variations of spelling the word
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JackGrimm [Crypt]
You have successfully thieved StringyJon.
You have successfully thieved StringyJon, but they are not carrying any gold at the moment.

Its tautology (or redundency)
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ohfudge [Cloud]
You where right, you won 2 chips!
You have got 185 chips left.

Welcome to the Creature intelligence research bet game.
We are trying to find certain paterns in the behaviour of the creatures.
&quot;Even if the world don't see it, you still mean the world to Jesus&quot; - Lecrae Moore.
The Couch YetiTemp [~L~]
Whenever Winning a Bid by the Auction it reads:

Sent by the game
Sent on: 2011-11-05 14:12

Topic: Cave of trades
An Cave of trades runner tells you:
You have bid XXX for "Name" his/her 1 "XXX" and won the auction!
Here it is...
You got the item you bid for!


Shouldn't it read:

Your bid XXX for "XXX's" X "XXX" has won the auction !
Here it is...
You get the item(s) you bid for !

Edited on 05-11-2011 15:02

Even Better, but I wont take the credit


From player: Treize
Sent on: 2011-11-05 15:33

Topic: Forum
You have bid [gp] for [name] his/her [x item] and won the auction!

I reckon "his/her" is there because "Name" cannot have the possessive 's affixed in the end. If this is the case, shortening it to

Your bid XXX for "XXX's" X "XXX" has won the auction !

still doesn't pass that hurdle.

If we want to make it clean, perhaps we could isolate [name] from [gp] and [x item].

Topic: Cave of trades
An Cave of trades runner tells you:
You have bid [gp] for [x item] and won the auction! On behalf of [name] and Ogre Trendus, I warmly congratulate you!
Here is the item you bid for.

I'm not posting this on the thread coz it's your idea to target that issue.

Treize

Edited on 05-11-2011 16:20
My skills neglected, my pockets collected, Pirate Life Selected.
John Doe [Love]
At cornflakes post:

"While fishing, you caught a Leather boots!

Surely it should be...

While fishing, you caught a pair of Leather Boots!"

the change is before the item name unless leather boots name is "a Leather boots".

I just saw the letter B from boots... you are right there.

Just my opinion

Edited on 05-11-2011 15:38
There are 210 other players working here. XD
Hazgod [-TL-]
Yep but it is just $item and I'm not going to put different code in for every item
Lovenskjold [Vital]
From quest book:
"Find Teds key in the Archeological cave"

Is it ted or tep?
InFrAtRaCe [JADED]
The trade has been succesful!

shouldnt it be
The trade has been successful! ?
[W]23:26 Beer[JADED]: You are genius my friend<br /> [W]00:10 vincius[Loyal]: The pricemaster? :P <br /> <br /> -= You found 1 Four leaf clover while walking ! =- x2<br /> InFrAtRaCe
Ned Kelly [Gang]
Sanfew is a peacefull town in the southwest of Syrnia. Although it is peaceful, there is the big jail in Sanfew. When comitting a crime, you will be locked up in there, but you aren't a criminal.... are you?.

If you're new around here you could start some mining at Rynir Mines North-East of here. Or you could fish some shrimp at Lisim to prepare yourself for battle. (Make sure to cook the fish at Harith!)


Sanfew is a peaceful town in the southwest of Syrnia. Although it is peaceful, there is the big jail in Sanfew. If you are caught committing a crime, you will be locked up in there, but you aren't a criminal.... are you?.

If you're new around here you could start some mining at Rynir Mines northeast of here. Or you could fish some shrimp at Lisim to prepare yourself for battle. (Make sure to cook the shrimp at Harith!)

Alternative
Sanfew is a peaceful town located in the southwest of Remer Island. Although peaceful, Sanfew houses a large jail. If you are caught committing a crime anywhere on Remer Island, you will be locked up there, but you aren't a criminal.... are you?.

If you're new around here you could start some mining at Rynir Mines just northeast of here, or you could fish for some shrimp at nearby Lisim to prepare yourself for battle at Valera. (Make sure to cook the shrimp at Harith!)
____________________________

Accepting Thieving guild jobs at Mentan.

Script number 1
Welcome to the thieving guild.

You are member of the thieving guild and can now recieve jobs.

Hello [player],
Yes..you could do something for us..

Could you try to thieve [player] for us? At least scare [player] with a good thief attempt, that will tell [player] we're after them.
He was last seen at Sanfew. You should thieve [player] within 20 minutes.


Welcome to The Thieving guild.

You are member of The Thieving guild and can now receive jobs.

Hello [player],
Yes..you could do something for us..

Could you try to thieve [Player] for us? At least scare [Player] with a good thief attempt, that will tell [Player] we're after them.
They were last seen in Sanfew. You should thieve [Player] within 20 minutes.

Script number 2
[Player] has been killing some of ours thiefs in the Outlands.
[Player] has been killing some of our thieves in The Outlands.

Script number 3
[Player] has been ashaming the thieving guild.
[Player] has been shaming The Thieving guild.

Script number 4
We got pretty tired of [Player], we want to threathen them.
We are getting pretty tired of [Player], we want you to threaten them.

Edited on 10-11-2011 06:30
barun511 [T|B|E]
s damaged, the durabilty bonus was reduced by one.

should be Durability, surely?
Enjoy the signature and avatar :) Regards The Donation Fairy.<br /> <br /> barun511 arvindr(40) attacked Evert, and did 1 damage. Evert had 101 HP left.<br /> <br /> You have married Assilim!
enigma [AFK]
Hey and welcome to Harith!


Shouldn't that be Hello or Hi and welcome to Harith!
Solunar [Choob]
Rose gate guard: "Okay, human, your gate pass is valid, you can go through."

Wouldn't her recognise you as not being another species, but the same as him?
[2]00:42 (Mod)Moderator: *Hugs Solunar*<br /> [2] 00:45 Solunar[Choob]: Mod, can I has a piggy-back? :o<br /> [2] 00:47 (Mod)Moderator: Ok jump on :)<br /> <br /> [2]01:11 Solunar[Choob]: You have married Poppins! (06-10-2011)
JackGrimm [Crypt]
Even though there aren't much green trees in here you found some tree barks which you can cut.

Much should be many
Im a noob. Get over it!<br /> <br /> 33 Critical hit: You struck and dealt 33 damage to the Tree viper. 0/9
JackGrimm [Crypt]
@ Sol, i think the human part is just, as they wont let lizard people in.
Im a noob. Get over it!<br /> <br /> 33 Critical hit: You struck and dealt 33 damage to the Tree viper. 0/9
JackGrimm [Crypt]
You have been locked up in the Sanfew jail.

Shouldn't it be:
You are locked up in the Sanfew jail.
2011-11-20 11:58:56 undecided(46) attacked Sniper, and did 16 damage. Sniper had 5 HP left.<br /> 2011-11-20 11:58:56 Jack the Reaper(37) attacked Sniper, and did 15 damage. Sniper had 0 HP left.<br /> <br /> TAG TEAM!
Burnt Cod [Zen]
Not sure if this is changeable, but is similar to the past 'Ogre Spike Helm'

Some items, such as Burnt Cod, Cooked Herring and a few more have all important words capitalized. (for instance, in Bouquette of Tulips, of is not capitalized due to it being unimportant)

Is it possible to change 'Small fishing boat' to Small Fishing Boat, 'Elven cocktail' to 'Elven Cocktail' and so on?

EDIT: Alright Mod

Edited on 20-11-2011 20:51
JackGrimm [Crypt]
Even though there aren't many green trees in here you found some tree barks which you can cut.

Should be tree bark (sorry i didnt pick it up on the 1st one)
2011-11-20 11:58:56 undecided(46) attacked Sniper, and did 16 damage. Sniper had 5 HP left.<br /> 2011-11-20 11:58:56 Jack the Reaper(37) attacked Sniper, and did 15 damage. Sniper had 0 HP left.<br /> <br /> TAG TEAM!
Demon Zito [Crypt]
I wont let you fight the rat anymore, thats no challenge for you anymore!
Anymore said twice sounds weird and "I wont let you fight the rat anymore" sounds very strange!! Not spelling errors but just awkward sentences
JackGrimm [Crypt]
Syrnia is a browserbased multiplayer game set in an Medieval age.

On the Homepage. Should be a
34 Critical hit: You struck and dealt 34 damage to the Gnome. 0/7
Solunar [Choob]
You joined syrnia xxxx days ago, you were player number xxxx.

Should be, you are player number...
[2]00:42 (Mod)Moderator: *Hugs Solunar*<br /> [2] 00:45 Solunar[Choob]: Mod, can I has a piggy-back? :o<br /> [2] 00:47 (Mod)Moderator: Ok jump on :)<br /> <br /> [2]01:11 Solunar[Choob]: You have married Poppins! (06-10-2011)
Mr Coffee [TSoH]
I can't give a direct quote from the interface, because I am not there. But at Ketil, The text there is basically a copy/paste of Valera combat training text. I think all references to "begining" warriors should be changed to "advanced".
62 Critical hit: You struck and dealt 62 damage to the Gorgon Cloaker. 0/42<br /> 64 Critical hit: You struck and dealt 64 damage to the White bat.0/32<br /> &quot;Happiness is a full iggy&quot;
Burnt Cod [TSoH]
There are 1 people fighting here.

There is 1 typo lurking here.
Solunar [Choob]
Burnt, the game would have to have two separate speeling's then.

There is 1 person fighting here.
There are 2 people fighting here.

We can't change that
[2]00:42 (Mod)Moderator: *Hugs Solunar*<br /> [2] 00:45 Solunar[Choob]: Mod, can I has a piggy-back? :o<br /> [2] 00:47 (Mod)Moderator: Ok jump on :)<br /> <br /> [2]01:11 Solunar[Choob]: You have married Poppins! (06-10-2011)
Mr_Miyagi [-TL-]
When I return as a rich man I won't forget you..I might trow a gnome with your name on it !

Should be 'throw' not 'trow'
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JackGrimm [Crypt]
There are 1 people fighting here.

still there
[2]09:04 Jack the Reaper[Crypt]: everything in moderation is healthy (well almost everything)<br /> <br /> [2]09:04 (Mod)Moderator: How little you know Jack ;)
R2 D2 [Pond]
You have xxx bread, you have xxx grain left
You have xxx bread, you have xxx grain left.


Edited on 14-12-2011 07:28
theking [Cloud]
With your trading level you can manage 4332 slots each shop.

SHOULD BE

With your trading level you can manage 4332 slots (IN) each shop.
[5]00:00 jenilyn[Boo]: ty king ur much better than mods<br /> <br /> [2]18:21 zephyrys: Hail to the King, baby!<br /> <br /> [3]05:35 Divinity[Cloud]: Yes tk, you're amazing<br /> <br /> TK4LIFE
Striker3 [Crypt]
You have bought an Rose gate pass.

a not an
I don't think you understand.<br /> <br /> <br /> [3]22:56 Demon Zito[Crypt]: ;D a clan without striker is bad clan!
a_f_c [~FoS~]
"Welcome to the Cave of trades!
Got a rare item you want to sell? You'll get the most gold by selling it here!
We charge a small 5% fee if you successfully sell an item.
If we are successfully running our Cave of trades we will expand to more locations in the world of Syrnia.
- Ogre Trendus"

At Pensax, not sure about Eully as i cant check it

Should be Pensax Trendus, Eully Trendus or Kanzo Trendus for the right places

Edited on 18-12-2011 03:34
Joined : Saturday, October 21, 2006<br /> You have married Iritella! October 21, 2011<br /> <br /> [W] 02:42 Vonstuker[~FoS~]: if I had a son it would be you &lt;3<br /> <br /> ~FoS~ &quot;Powered by Obsidian&quot;
Sheep [1-Sec]
"You did not yet play enough to unlock this game." when at the elven casino.

Should be "You have not yet played enough to unlock this game." I think..
Panta Rei, Ever changing.<br /> <br /> Thanks to Greenlady for her kind donation.
Tazz [Cyber]
"send" button for chat should be a capital "S".
[1]03:08 Ardarel[Tazz]: Oh, Tazz, I'm your biggest fan! &lt;3<br /> <br /> The Captain Keelhail struck at Tazz and did 76 damage. 0/60<br /> First player captured.<br /> <br /> Tazz struck and dealt 21 damage to the Deep sea monster.
Uzumaki [Choob]
If Halloween witch keeps bothering us we will ask you to scare once more. Thanks a lot. You got 105 thieving experience.

Should be

If Halloween witch keeps bothering us we will ask you to scare him/her once more. Thanks a lot. You got 105 thieving experience.
You have successfully thieved the shop and got 6363 gold!<br /> You have successfully thieved the shop and got 1209 gold!<br /> You have successfully thieved the shop and got 1354 gold! <br /> <br /> My Lucky day. 29/11/11
Burnt Cod [TSoH]
Section 18 - Premium points (previously (Donations")

In the rules - Shouldn't there be another quote in front of "Donations"?
Demon Zito [Crypt]
There are no more Rat monsters at Eully, click here to return to Eully.
The invasion was GNOMES at Eully! What is going on??
I don't know whether I'm alive and dreaming or dead and remembering. How can you tell what's a dream and what's real if you can't even tell when you're awake or when you're asleep? Where am I?
JackGrimm [Crypt]
Syrnia Rules Act (2009) Last edited 10 January 2010
The last edited date is a bit off, since it was edited recently for the 13+ joining age.
[2]09:04 Jack the Reaper[Crypt]: everything in moderation is healthy (well almost everything)<br /> [2]09:04 (Mod)Moderator: How little you know Jack ;)<br /> <br /> You have successfully thieved the shop and got 0 gold!
Demon Zito [Crypt]
They spelt gnomes wrong Jack ;D
I don't know whether I'm alive and dreaming or dead and remembering. How can you tell what's a dream and what's real if you can't even tell when you're awake or when you're asleep? Where am I?
R2 D2 [Pond]
At Harith's House of Floral.. I don't know about the other flower places.

'Appologies'
Apologies
(Purple rhas' occasion)

'Thanks for buying at Remers House of Floral!'
Hmm.. Remer's, maybe?

Buying any bouquette.. Though, using a bouquette of Carnations for example:
'For occasion:Thanks.'
That appears in the top of the window, before 'To:' and 'Message:'.
For occasion: Thanks.

>.>
Burnt Cod [TSoH]
Equip a hammer!You do not have the right construction level to use this hammer for construction.

Add a space after Hammer!
Thank you to SoH and ThornTree for the Donation.<br /> <br /> [6]18:19 (Mod)Moderator: *Comes to Burnt Cods rescue*<br /> [0]03:31 Burnt Cod got a Frost gloves.<br /> <br /> Thank you to those in our armed forces.<br /> <br /> TSoH 4 Life!
Elh [AFK]
Welcome to Kinam.
This place has recently been founded by a rich family. They were constructing some new furnaces whch are even capable of smelting steel bars, and everyone is free to use them.
Because of the great interest a Trading post has been settled here.
If this family is going to build more on their location is unknown.





Welcome to Kinam.
This place has recently been founded by a rich family. They were constructing some new furnaces which are even capable of smelting steel bars, and everyone is free to use them.
Because of the great interest a Trading post has been settled here.
If this family is going to build more on their location is unknown.

Edited on 17-02-2012 20:49
&quot;Moral courage is the most valuable and usually the most absent characteristic in men.&quot;<br /> - General George S. Patton, Jr<br /> <br /> You have been online for 900 minutes since your last login.
Sheep [1-Sec]
Upgrade: +2 Durability (1 Hardened spider silk)
You need to wear a hammer. Equip your hammer and [L]here[/L] click here to continue.

[L]-[/L] specifies which one is the link in red.. I think the error is self explanatory

Same thing for the +1 durability too.
Panta Rei, Ever changing.<br /> <br /> Thanks to Greenlady for her kind donation.
ZedarFlight [LLL]
At ancestral mountains on heerchey


Ancestrail mountain gaurd: "Sorry ZedarFlight, you are not allowed to use the mines yet.
The Heerchey family won't allow everyone to mine here, only respected people can gain acces."

Ancestrail -> Ancestral
Acces-> Access
Burnt Cod [TSoH]
Zedar's post: Guard is spelt wrong.
Thank you to SoH and ThornTree for the Donation.<br /> <br /> [6]18:19 (Mod)Moderator: *Comes to Burnt Cods rescue*<br /> <br /> You have successfully thieved the Burnt Cod!<br /> <br /> =Proud Co-Leader of The Shire=
WilsFace [Cloud]
The first Thieving guild quest when you have to find Razor in the Outlands. He says "You'de. . ."

Should be "You'd"
Burnt Cod [TSoH]
Welcome to the Hook market
Suit yourself!


Should be Hooks Edge market
Thank you to SoH and ThornTree for the Donation.<br /> <br /> [6]18:19 (Mod)Moderator: *Comes to Burnt Cods rescue*<br /> <br /> You have successfully thieved the Burnt Cod!<br /> <br /> =Proud Co-Leader of The Shire=
Burnt Cod [TSoH]
Your Lockpick broke opening the Locked toolbox, you can only continue lockpicking if you have another lockpick.


should be


Your Lockpick broke opening the Locked toolbox; you can... etc.


or the Semi-colon can be replaced with a period.
Thank you to SoH and ThornTree for the Donation.<br /> <br /> [6]18:19 (Mod)Moderator: *Comes to Burnt Cods rescue*<br /> <br /> You have successfully thieved the Burnt Cod!<br /> <br /> =Proud Co-Leader of The Shire=
Mr Coffee [TSoH]
Burning Beach:
Before you step off the boat onto a small beach with a few fires with people cooking around them you see the dense jungle in the distance that covers most of the island, only large stone walls stand out near the middle of the island.In the sea breeze you notice the smell of roses along with the normal smells you expect.


Really run-on sentences. Should be more like:

As you step off the the boat you see a small beach littered with cooking fires and people cooking around them. Off in the distance you see the Vista of a Dark dense Jungle that incorporates the Island. Large stone walls stand out near the middle of the island. With the sea breeze you notice the smell of roses, as well as the normal scents you might expect.

Edited on 09-01-2012 03:13
64 Critical hit: You struck and dealt 64 damage to the White bat.0/32<br /> &quot;Happiness is a full iggy&quot;<br /> TSoH 4 Life!
Tike [Pog]
However, our furnaces can only reach a temparature high enough to smelt bronze and iron bars.


Temperature (Endarx Info)
Burnt Cod [TSoH]
To buy the 50 Rod you need 3750 gold!


should be you bought the 50 rod
Thank you to SoH and ThornTree for the Donation.<br /> <br /> [6]18:19 (Mod)Moderator: *Comes to Burnt Cods rescue*<br /> <br /> You have successfully thieved the Burnt Cod!<br /> <br /> =Proud Co-Leader of The Shire=
Burnt Cod [TSoH]
Map says Sorer Island

Dropdown on full map screen says "Webbers Island"
Thank you to SoH and ThornTree for the Donation.<br /> <br /> [6]18:19 (Mod)Moderator: *Comes to Burnt Cods rescue*<br /> <br /> You have successfully thieved the Burnt Cod!<br /> <br /> =Proud Co-Leader of The Shire=
C4LV1N [SWC]
Your Copper ore action expired, you can pickup the item at Kanzo to be able to add new auctions.

This message appears when I add my last possible auction to the CoT. "action" should be "auction".
Treize [C.L.]
There is a limit though [onto] how much it can be upgraded. Houses [are around] the 10,000 slot size.

Choice of words..

There is a limit though [on] how much it can be upgraded. Houses [can be upgraded up to] the 10,000 slot size.
16-09-2011. You have auctioned 53k seeds, beet to pumpkin!<br /> <br /> 01-09-2011. You have opened 100 Small chests! 29% cash, 15% grain seeds, 14% corn seeds, 13% moonie, 12% tomato seeds, 9% strawberry seeds, 8% avril.
Treize [C.L.]
Constructing manual > How to Upgrade

There is a limit though [onto] how much it can be upgraded. Houses [are around] the 10,000 slot size.

Choice of words..

There is a limit though [on] how much it can be upgraded. Houses [can be upgraded up to] the 10,000 slot size.
16-09-2011. You have auctioned 53k seeds, beet to pumpkin!<br /> <br /> 01-09-2011. You have opened 100 Small chests! 29% cash, 15% grain seeds, 14% corn seeds, 13% moonie, 12% tomato seeds, 9% strawberry seeds, 8% avril.
Ryuuk [Spork]
You have gained clanleadership of the Lunch Time clan. LaurinyxJero has stopped as clanleader, you took over his place.

Should be his/hers or their
[2]07:06 (Mod)Moderator: No it wasn't. One Ryuuk is not worth 3 million apples, not by a long shot.<br /> <br /> Awesome avvy made by Shark :D
Alex [O.G.]
On the main forum page it says

'Last 30 replies grouped by topic'

Not sure what was meant, but i don`t see replies are grouped by topic.
Should be just 'Last 30 replies'?
Fugazi [Bang!]
Did they ever fix the spelling of Bouquet in this game. The wrong spelling that was listed in a rather vulgar term
Killruna [O.G.]
the first post by Hazgod:

quote:
"Item names and city names CAN NOT BE CHANGED"
You have married Leny ! (B)<br /> <br /> PAIN to live in &gt;:)<br /> player #13 to reach magic 50!<br /> [1] 00:21 Jquad[RAVEN]: holycrap I died fast!
Elh [AFK]
You gained acces to the Ancestral mountains and the archeological cave.

should be


You gained access to the Ancestral mountains and the archeological cave.

Edited on 17-02-2012 20:50
&quot;Moral courage is the most valuable and usually the most absent characteristic in men.&quot;<br /> - General George S. Patton, Jr<br /> <br /> You have been online for 900 minutes since your last login.
Uzumaki [~FoS~]
Your Gold hands was destroyed while fighting. Were not was.
[2]09:31 Borneo[C.]: I fear no one<br /> [2]09:32 Borneo[C.]: um, I didnt say that with my out-loud voice did I...*shudders*
majykhobbit [*TF*]
At Castle Rose, in the tavern, when starting the Lonely Bard quest it says:

"I hope you do succeed in finding some imspiration for love songs on this island."

imspiration should be inspiration
JackGrimm [~L~]
There is an event at [location].
On the event lists
2012-01-12 10:57:03 Jack the Reaper killed barun511 arvindr<br /> <br /> Rest in pieces dear friend.
Mephisto [Cloud]
You have bid 101 for theking his/her 1 Lockpick and won the auction!

Should be,

You have bid 101 gold for 1 Lockpick from theking and won the auction!
Religion is an insult to human dignity with or without it, you'd have good people doing good things and evil people doing bad things, but for good people to do bad things, it takes religion.
Fugazi [Bang!]
Please enter a comma seperated list of player names to report:
(no spaces between comma's and names E.g "Lord Harry,Joe,Bob"):


First off, E.g. needs to read e.g and per proper grammar a comma must follow "e.g" in a sentnece as you are giving an example after the fact.
The first sentence lacks proper grammar thus making it difficult to read.

So to correct the above sentence it should read:

Please enter a comma to seperate player's name on report: (no spaces between comma's and names e.g, "Lord Harry,Joe,Bob".):
aussiebeast [Core]
Further to Distractia's...

"comma's" should be "commas"
Why would I shoot a bloke BANG, then carry him to the bloody car and wizz him off to the hospital at a hundred miles an hour? It defeats the purpose of having shot him in the first place.
Sheep [1-Sec]
Tep Diggins: "I lost an important locked box, and the key to open it .
You should first try to find the key since I'm sure a cave creature has taken it, I'm not sure about the metal box but that could be stolen by a cave creature too since it is not too heavy. I hope you can find it.

The kidnapped lunchbox Find Teds key in the Archeological

The paragraph is from Arch cave SW, and the line if from the quests tab, it's what it reads when highlighted.

I don't know which name is correct, and Archeological should be Archaeological.
Panta Rei, Ever changing.<br /> <br /> Thanks to Greenlady for her kind donation.
Solunar [Choob]
You have been playing Syrnia for 3858 hours and 37 minutes.

You joined syrnia 631 days ago, you were player number 324441.

Not a spelling mistake, but for consistency, the s in the second Syrnia should be a capital consider it is a pronoun
[2]00:42 (Mod)Moderator: *Hugs Solunar*<br /> [2] 00:45 Solunar[Choob]: Mod, can I has a piggy-back? :o<br /> [2] 00:47 (Mod)Moderator: Ok jump on :)
ooF [=SoA=]
Build a house (5000 slots) 10 000 wood,
shouldn't it be "Build a house (5000 slots) 10,000 wood"?
If that's possible


The wise man knows when to fight, but he also knows when to give up.
majykhobbit [*TF*]
In the Earning the Family Respect quest, once at McGoogins site, it should say:

"suddenly" disappeared, not suddently
[2]22:08 nirvanaishdude[Pond]: I am he without sin, I am the Messiah reborn. Flock to me, my children.
ChaosTheory [-DRS-]
After completely a Thieving Guild job, this message appears:

You had X seconds left to complete this task.
Wow you did that within 5 minutes, awesome! (not always this, just what happened this time)
Let's see if X will now think twice before messing with the thieving guild!
Thanks alot.

"alot" should be changed to "a lot".
There's a fine line between not listening and not caring. I like to think I walk that line every day of my life.<br /> [3]18:16 LaurinyxJero[Spork]: i find it awesome to role play!<br /> [2]13:46 Sephiroth[Choob]: Slate.. I &lt;3 you. :o
Dark Warrior []
ORIGINAL
You ate a Carrots and gained 2 HP

Edit
You ate a Carrot and gained 2 HP

Since users can only eat 1 at a time it should read as carrot and not carrots.
You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.
iFrozen []
Dark Warrior - They can't change that because then they'd have to changed the whole database because the item carrots could be like 123 or 736 which is a lot more numbers than 1.
Rock [TSoH]
You have not have enough resources to build a boat.
The early bird may get the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese.<br /> <br /> I fear the man who drinks water and so remembers this morning what the rest of us said last night.
Dragoon227 [LLL]
just something i saw, if you put something in the Stockhouse and put in a symbol it will say "[3]07:19 Dragoon227 added 1$5 Wood to Elven gate" or anything you want like "[3]07:19 Dragoon227 added 1#4 Wood to Elven gate" "added 18*6 Wood to Elven gate"
23 Everyday Words and Phrases Used by Gamers, That Non-Gamers Think Mean Something VERY Different<br /> <br /> Energy bar(n):A graphical indicator of the in-game avatar's current state of health, shielding or other analogue for general vitality.
JackGrimm [~L~]
Bouquette should be Bouquet
2012-01-12 10:57:03 Jack the Reaper killed barun511 arvindr<br /> <br /> Rest in pieces dear friend.
theking [Cloud]
theking ate Black easter egg and gained 20 HP

SHOULD BE theking has eaten a black Easter egg and gained 20 HP
[5]00:00 jenilyn[Boo]: ty king ur much better than mods<br /> <br /> [2]18:21 zephyrys: Hail to the King, baby!<br /> <br /> [3]05:35 Divinity[Cloud]: Yes tk, you're amazing<br /> <br /> TK4LIFE
dwarfkoala [~FaM~]
Item names cannot be changed.
[2]03:39 (Mod)Moderator: Gentlemen, you are the product of 4 billion years of evolution. Please start acting like it.<br /> <br /> [2]03:28 willie[~HaJ~]: And the result is Deja Vu.
zoefmaister [-DRS-]
Clans
Alliance's/War's and other clan affairs

in forum
should be Alliances/Wars and other clan affairs

right?
JackGrimm [~L~]
dwarfkoala, I believe that means that the item cannot be changed from plural to singlular (you found 1 carrot seeds -> you found 1 carrot seed)

Proof of this is that the spiked ogre helm was renamed to ogre spiked helm
OL<br /> 2012-01-12 10:57:03 Jack the Reaper killed barun511 arvindr<br /> <br /> BM<br /> 2012-05-12 08:22:57 Jack the Reaper killed a_f_c
dwarfkoala [~FaM~]
Ah, I see what you mean, yes that's true.
[2]03:39 (Mod)Moderator: Gentlemen, you are the product of 4 billion years of evolution. Please start acting like it.<br /> <br /> [2]03:28 willie[~HaJ~]: And the result is Deja Vu.
theking [Cloud]
dwarf as to the grammatical sense not the easter egg thing that i know cant be changed

theking ate Black easter egg and gained 20 HP

SHOULD BE theking has eaten a black Easter egg and gained 20 HP

HENCE eaten to ate is more grammatically correct

Edited on 24-05-2012 00:32
[5]00:00 jenilyn[Boo]: ty king ur much better than mods<br /> <br /> [2]18:21 zephyrys: Hail to the King, baby!<br /> <br /> [3]05:35 Divinity[Cloud]: Yes tk, you're amazing<br /> <br /> TK4LIFE
The Couch YetiTemp [~L~]
theking ate Black easter egg and gained 20 HP

theking ate a Black easter egg and gained 20 HP
My Skills Neglected, My Pockets Collected.<br /> Pirates life has been selected, A liveliness dedicated.
barun511 [Elves]
Stop them of capturing this town and join the fight.

Stop them from capturing this town and join the fight. <-- Correction
011-12-03 05:07:30 barun511 arvindr(43) attacked Ceba, and did 11 damage. Ceba had 0 HP left. <br /> <br /> barun511 arvindr(41) attacked wikid, and did 21 damage. wikid had 53 HP left.<br /> <br /> <br /> You have married Assilim!
ChaosControl [=.=]
In the clan Options page:

[Clan name and tag] currently have no stockhouses.

This should read:

[Clan name and tag] currently has no stockhouses.
[2]07:12 (Mod)Borneo[C.]: [3]07:11 (Mod)Borneo[C.]: well hello there ChaosControl<br /> &lt;3 Nice Mod Choobs :D
Mr Coffee [TSoH]
At the support syrnia page.

Unlocked 2500 No in-game adds (At forum and messages)

Should be No in-game ads (At forum and messages)
Proud Owner of the Golden Hoe<br /> 8th Member of the 1000 TL club<br /> &quot;Happiness is a full iggy&quot;<br /> <br /> TSoH 4 Life!
Mr Coffee [TSoH]
Welcome to Port Senyn,

This is where you can set your sails and throw out your nets!
It's the biggest fishing place of Syrnia, but you need a boat to fish on sea..
This is not the place to fish with your rod, you can better do that at Lisim!


Should be:
Welcome to Port Senyn,

This is where you can set your sails and throw out your nets!
It's the biggest fishing place of Syrnia, but you need a boat to fish on the sea..<< remove extra .
This is not the place to fish with your rod, you can better do that at Lisim!

Edited on 09-07-2012 13:24
Proud Owner of the Golden Hoe<br /> 8th Member of the 1000 TL club<br /> &quot;Happiness is a full iggy&quot;<br /> <br /> TSoH 4 Life!
Karisade [-DRS-]
Further to incognito's post above^

"...you can better do that at Lisim!" would be more natural English as "...you can do that better at Lisim!"
[2]04:26 (Mod)Moderator: *slaps Karisade*
Treize [C.]
You successfully thieved in order of the thieving guild.

Change to: You successfully thieved [by] order of the thieving guild.
2012-07-09 01:05 Treize has declined Tulip for you at Elven gate D:
Treize [C.]
You successfully thieved in order of the thieving guild.

Change to: You successfully thieved [by] order of the Thieving guild.
2012-07-09 01:05 Treize has declined Tulip for you at Elven gate D:
KingBatfink [Snake]
Also on thieving guild quests it says Thief xxxxxx, shouldnt it be Thieve xxxxxx

Edited on 17-07-2012 02:55
VampiricWolf [Choob]
Your farmland is capable of holding 400 crops, you can seed 221 more crops.

Should either be:Your farmland is capable of holding 400 crops, you can plant 221 more crops. (so the Seed is changed to plant)

OR

Your farmland is capable of holding 400 crops, you can plant 221 more seeds. (so the seed is changed to plant and the crops is changed to seeds)
redhdsrbtr [JADED]
The act of planting is also seeding. To seed farmland is also gramaticaly correct.
&quot;Mortal ears cannot bear to hear the roaring silence of the thundering quiet&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;It is good to be without vices, but it is not good to be without temptations&quot; <br /> <br /> Heart of Flame, Soul of Fire
JackGrimm [~L~]
In the manual -> speed.
Travel To all but Skull Island, Heerchey Island or Kanzo is free if you own a small fishing boat, Sloop, Boat or Trawler.

A Canoe is missing
2012-06-10 13:31 Levels: 40 - 49<br /> Jack the Reaper won and got a Desert arena medal and 200 combat experience (3 players)
22ducky22 [=SoA=]
On the main forum page:
"Clans
Alliance's/War's and other clan affairs"
should be:
"Clans
Alliances/Wars and other clan affairs"
Apollodorus [TSoH]
Select a metal to smith:
Bronze
Iron
Steei



Steel not Steei
JackGrimm [~L~]
Just a suggestion:
Cant you make all the fish singular or plural?

Trouts and Shrimps
vs
Sardine, Herring, Mackeral, Cod, Pike, Salmon, Tuna, Lobster, Bass, etc

Almost every other item in the game is singular (except seeds and maybe a few others).

Edited on 07-08-2012 19:49
Coke with Bacon. Pity its diet...<br /> <br /> 2012-06-10 13:31 Levels: 40 - 49<br /> Jack the Reaper won and got a Desert arena medal and 200 combat experience (3 players)
Spooff [~FoS~]
When searching for items in a shop

Item Much Title Owner Location

should much be "quantity"
A Lie is a great Story someone ruined with the Truth - Barney Stinson<br /> <br /> Annoying you since 14 Dec 2005
Hexis [*TF*]
The description of Kanzo is gramatically incorrect.

Named After the island itself. This town is Famous for the Magical Tower and for its high level in school training. On some nights during a lightning storm you can see a casted shadow on the tower. Some say it is White Wizard, but noone has ever say the figure of him.

Perhaps should read something like:

Named after the island itself, Kanzo is famous for it's Magical Tower and it's university. On some nights, during a lightning storm a shadow can be seen cast upon the tower. Some say it is the White Wizard, though none have ever seen him.
My superiority complex is waaay better than your's.<br /> <br /> <br /> 'I may be going to hell in a bucket babe, but at least I'm enjoying the ride' ~Grateful Dead
Blaidd_Drwg [HR]
I just noticed a double "take" on the pirate join screen at xanso

copy of what i seen there is below

The pirates are currently recruiting new members.
Do you want to join the evil side of Syrnia and plunder all islands?
Since we are in desperate need of recruits we will let you join if you take take 1 Keg of rum with you....
After joining the pirates you will not receive any rewards for invasions/events you've just participated in.
Join the pirates.
Blaidd_Drwg [HR]
another one at Castle Rose

The city has a very nice smithing facility that is known for there great iron and steel works and it's free to use.

Should this not be "their" great iron and steel works....
coolnes96 [~HaJ~]
In the "Slaying the monster" quest it says:
Wow I never thought you would make it out alive !
Now I can tell everyone I have been training you to kill it. I finally get some fame wich I have always wanted.
People will be very excited to hear this adventure !
Thanks for helping me. I've reached what I want, i can stop fighting now.
You can have this acient sword... This was property of the army who created Valera ages ago...

Which and ancient are spelled wrong, a few parts of it are grammatically incorrect , and I is not capitalized.

It should be:
Wow, I never thought you would make it out alive !
Now I can tell everyone I have been training you to kill it. I finally get some fame, which I have always wanted.
People will be very excited to hear this adventure !
Thanks for helping me. I've reached what I want, I can stop fighting now.
You can have this ancient sword... This was property of the army who created Valera ages ago...
R2 D2 [puddy]
Some additions to coolness96's (Bolded my part):

---

Wow, I never thought you would make it out alive!
Now I can tell everyone I have been training you to kill it. I finally will get some fame, which is something I have always wanted.
People will be very excited to hear of this adventure!
Thank you for helping me. I've reached my goals, I can stop fighting now.
You can have this ancient sword... This was once property of the army who created Valera ages ago...

---

Or at least, that would be how I would've put it.
I tawt I taw a puddy tat!
JackGrimm [~L~]
We are attacking islands soon, therefore you cannot access the stockhouse at the moment.
This is displayed in the stockhouse, after the pirates have been sent, and have captured.
You merely adopted the lag, I was born with it!
JackGrimm [~L~]
Welcome to Penteza's shop.
We have got some valuable stuff for sale.
You merely adopted the lag, I was born with it!
theking [Cloud]
You got 1 Iron legs!
I did not get more than one legs
[5]00:00 jenilyn[Boo]: ty king ur much better than mods<br /> <br /> [2]18:21 zephyrys: Hail to the King, baby!<br /> <br /> [3]05:35 Divinity[Cloud]: Yes tk, you're amazing<br /> <br /> TK4LIFE
Tike [1-Sec]
I dont think that will change, the only thing it could change to is "One Pair of iron Legs" or One set
fraggelmupp [~TLO~]
You have not have enough resources to continue building the clan stockhouse.

too many "haves" perhaps? should be

You do not have enough resources to continue building the clan stockhouse.
Proud Leader of ~TLO~<br /> <br /> manducare primum, cogitare post<br /> <br /> &quot;The name's Muffin. Fraggelmuffin.&quot;<br /> &quot;Seeds, not grown.&quot;
Frowney001 [~HaJ~]
Ever hear of parsing? Just kidding
Eagle Scout, class of 2011<br /> <br /> Proud Co-leader of Honor and Justice<br /> <br /> Who are you to question why your god doesn't want me to believe in him?
JackGrimm [Fangz]
Some locations say "take a boat" while others say "sail"
You merely adopted the lag, I was born with it!
Mr Coffee [TSoH]
You have got no access to post on the forum because a moderator denied you access for the next 57 minutes

should be more like...

You cannot access the Forum for the next XX Minutes.

Proud Owner of the Golden Hoe<br /> 8th Member of the 1000 TL club<br /> &quot;Happiness is a full iggy&quot;<br /> <br /> TSoH 4 Life!
C4LV1N [SWC]
The descriptions for Arch. cave 4 could be improved grammatically. Some of these are grammatically important, others I just think make it read better...

4.2 (Tempa's tent):
"I do pretty well down here,; there is enough water in the dampy cave systems and I kill the dinosaurs for the their meat their and precious scales and hides.
"Crafting a lot of scales and hides, I learned how to create very powerfull Saurus armour,; I began learning to crafting hide using the bat hides."

4.7:
""The lava is hot enough to smelt various ores into bars, it is although it is too hot for bronze.
"Smelt iron bars
"Smelt steel bars
"Smelt gold bars

"The current circumstances at this location are perfect to smelt platina.
"In this environment it costs you 8 platina ore, 6 gold ore and 4 coal ore to create one platina bar.
"The costs could differ change if the environment changes, but it has been stable so far...
"Smelt platina bars

"The conditions are even well enough adequate for Syriet! But if this'll remain like that whether this will continue is even more unsure uncertain...
"Smelt Syriet bars"


Original text, in case my proposed edits muddle it up too much:

4.2 (Tempa's tent):
"I do pretty well down here, there is enough water in the damp cave systems and I kill the dinosaur for the meat their and precious scales and hides.
"Crafting a lot of scales and hide I learned how to create very powerfull Saurus armour, I began learning crafting hide using the bat hides."

4.7:
""The lava is hot enough to smelt various ores into bars, it is although too hot for bronze.
"Smelt iron bars
"Smelt steel bars
"Smelt gold bars

"The current circumstances at this location are perfect to smelt platina.
"In this environment it costs you 8 platina ore, 6 gold ore and 4 coal ore to create one platina bar.
"The costs could differ if the environment changes, but it has been stable so far...
"Smelt platina bars

"The conditions are even well enough for Syriet! But if this'll remain like that is even more unsure...
"Smelt Syriet bars"


...and the edited text without the original:

4.2 (Tempa's tent):
"I do pretty well down here; there is enough water in the damp cave systems and I kill the dinosaurs for their meat and precious scales and hides.
"Crafting a lot of scales and hides, I learned how to create very powerful Saurus armour; I began learning to craft hide using the bat hides."

4.7:
""The lava is hot enough to smelt various ores into bars, although it is too hot for bronze.
"Smelt iron bars
"Smelt steel bars
"Smelt gold bars

"The current circumstances at this location are perfect to smelt platina.
"In this environment it costs you 8 platina ore, 6 gold ore and 4 coal ore to create one platina bar.
"The cost could change if the environment changes, but it has been stable so far...
"Smelt platina bars

"The conditions are even adequate for Syriet! But whether this will continue is even more uncertain...
"Smelt Syriet bars"

Edited on 24-11-2012 13:32
Mr Coffee [TSoH]
Beset catacombs
Warriors from long ago sought to protect Anasco from horrible, unspeakable evil in this town.

comma is not needed here.
Proud Owner of the Golden Hoe<br /> 8th Member of the 1000 TL club<br /> &quot;Happiness is a full iggy&quot;<br /> <br /> TSoH 4 Life!
The Godfather [C.]
Equipping your Wildebeest pants

You can not equip your Wildebeest pants because you need level 35 speed to wear it.

and when you move your cursor over the item in inventory it shows the spelling Wildebeest pants



Shouldn't it be Wildebeast pants.
Letedy [AFK]
You find a warrior sobbing at the training grounds...talk to him.

Hello Letedy,
I was a well known warrior once...I was the most feared fighter in the Outlands..
But it has all changed after I ruled the outlands for 3 months. A group of people combined their powers to kill me when I was working in the Outlands. They succeeded because I did not even notice them attacking me in my back.
I am sure my stuff is still around in the Outlands. The people who attacked me are rich enough to buy beter equipment, they only wanted revenge.
Could you please return me my armour and weapon ?

Shouldn't the second 'Outlands' have a capital letter?
And the last two sentences. Isn't 'better' spelt wrong?
And 'me my armour' doesn't make any sense to me.
JackGrimm [Fangz]
^ and added to that
They succeeded because I did not even notice them attacking me in my back.
You merely adopted the lag, I was born with it!
Poobgloob [Wild]
I think the last part of that should be
"Could you please return to me my armour and weapon ?"

but i dunno, I could be wrong >.>

Edited on 18-12-2012 08:00
&quot;Maybe this world is another planet's Hell.&quot;<br /> -Anonymous
JackGrimm [Fangz]
There is 31450 Cooked Pike, 527 Pike and 31917 Wood in the stockhouse. left.

Get rod if the 1st .
You merely adopted the lag, I was born with it!
meangreen [GUARD]
Hello,

I am currently smithing Iron Legs. In the manual they say I get 19 EXP per smith. At this time I have only been receiving 16 experience. Thought I would let you know.

Thanks
C4LV1N [SWC]
"You can not work at this town until the town has been saved. If we do not manage to save the town it will be in control of the Evil elfs."

Better:

"You cannot work at this town until the town has been saved. If we do not manage to save the town it will be under the control of the Evil elfs."

For non-native speakers of English (or anyone else who might not recognize the subtleties represented here), the first change is because "can not" really means "are able to not," which doesn't eliminate the option of being able to work, just provides the option not to.

For the second, prepositions can be tough to translate; saying that the town is "in control" of the Evil elfs actually means that the Evil elfs are controlled by the town. The corrected version above has the intended meaning that the Evil elfs control the town.
Mr Coffee [TSoH]
Change your forum avatar
Your current avatar:
You did not yet upload an avatar.
Click on browse to select a picture.
The picture must be a GIF or JPG image, and smaller than 200 kB.

Should be:
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Proud Owner of the Golden Hoe<br /> 8th Member of the 1000 TL club<br /> &quot;Happiness is a full iggy&quot;<br /> <br /> TSoH 4 Life!
St0rmz_ [*TF*]
You are attacking a Grey bat (27) at Ketil.

Not so much a massive change but I like to keep to capitalising the start of all the creature names. For example not just the "Grey bat" but every other creature with 2 or more names should be capitalised i.e "Grey Bat", "Gold Scaled Gaman" and etc...

Its probably just me though
If anyone requires any enchants doing with all gems and items at hand I offer 300HP Free for every Enchant over a KTO.<br /> <br /> [W]17:44 Preff[Pub]: Lmao cheeky bugger :P
Evert [~FoS~]
.since nobody manages to open it the first person to open it is allowed to keep the contents of the chest.

.since nobody has managed to open it the first person to open it/guess the correct combination is allowed to keep the contents of the chest.
Dark Helmet [TSoH]
At Maadi:
You have not got enough magical powers yet to practise magic here.

I guess should be changed to something like:
You do not have enough magical power to practice magic here.
You have married PaddingtonBear! 10/28/2012<br /> <br /> &quot;If you sit there and try to use your brain to do it, it doesn't work the same...Keep your mouth talking, and eventually it will come out with something pretty good.&quot;
Blaidd_Drwg [HR]
At Rose Mines Intro Screen:

Named after the city that uses this mine for it's rich iron and coal veins.The city guards watch carefully to protect the miners here so they can work in peace.

there is no mention of the fact you can mine Silver here.

and there should be a space in-between "veins.The"
C4LV1N [SWC]
^Referring to the Rose mines quote above, "it's" is a contraction of "it is," and should be changed to the intended possessive pronoun, "its."
Greensky [Drunk]
Khaya's House of Floral

Bouquette of Purple rhas (100gp) Appologies

Too many p's in Apologies.
Guests are reminded that Platform One forbids the use of weapons, teleportation and religion.<br /> <br /> My felicitations upon this historical happenstance. I bring you the gift of bodily salivas.
Ner0 [~X~]
The citizens of Burning beach started a contest: The one to collect the best Venomous fang will be paid 1000 gold.
The second and thirth best entries will be paid out 500 and 333 gold.
The contest ends in 10 hours.

third not thirth
Listen Simon... Don't forget. Believe in yourself. Not in the you who believes in me. Not the me who believes in you. Believe in the you who believes in yourself<br /> <br /> Kamina(Tengen Toppa Gurren Laggen)<br /> ~X~ Rated since 05/10/2011
Pirate [~X~]
Ringtail lemur should be Ring-tailed lemur.
R2 D2 [Puddy]
At Valera's stables:


Welcome to the mule stables, these Mule's will carry all of your equipment and speed up your travelling.
You have married vincius! 12/21/12<br /> <br /> Rest in peace. &lt;3
C4LV1N [SWC]
At Harith flower shop (and probably the other flower shops, too), the reason for Purple rhas is listed as, "Appologies," but should be, "Apologies."
Treize [C.]
At Cave of Trades: "If we are successfully running our Cave of trades we will expand to more locations in the world of Syrnia."

Perhaps better expressed as: "If [our Cave of trades prove successful (or popular) we will expand to more locations in the world of Syrnia." The original doesn't sound convincing - to me at least.
Trades in everything everywhere.. well, almost..
Treize [C.]
At Cave of Trades: "If we are successfully running our Cave of trades we will expand to more locations in the world of Syrnia."

Perhaps better expressed as: "If [our Cave of trades proves successful (or popular) we will expand to more locations in the world of Syrnia." The original doesn't sound convincing - to me at least.
Trades in everything everywhere.. well, almost..
Treize [C.]
At Cave of Trades: "If we are successfully running our Cave of trades we will expand to more locations in the world of Syrnia."

Perhaps better expressed as: "If [our Cave of trades proves successful (or popular)] we will expand to more locations in the world of Syrnia." The original doesn't sound convincing - to me at least.
Trades in everything everywhere.. well, almost..
barun511 [*TF*]
In the manual, elven boots are given as 16 armour, they should be 6.
011-12-03 05:07:30 barun511 arvindr(43) attacked Ceba, and did 11 damage. Ceba had 0 HP left. <br /> <br /> barun511 arvindr(41) attacked wikid, and did 21 damage. wikid had 53 HP left.<br /> <br /> <br /> You have married Assilim!
JackGrimm [Fangz]
In the combat section of the manual (http://www.syrnia.com/index.php?page=manual&manual=combat) the dragon armor table's spacing is slightly off, so the 70 is on a new line.
You merely adopted the lag, I was born with it!<br /> <br /> /)<br /> *Brohoof*
barun511 [*TF*]
From player: The Fellowship
Sent on: 2013-04-19 19:31

Topic: Item approval
majykhobbit has declined Stemosaurus tail spike [2 Aim] for you at Port Senyn


Shouldn't it be Item declined? Or item disapproval?
011-12-03 05:07:30 barun511 arvindr(43) attacked Ceba, and did 11 damage. Ceba had 0 HP left. <br /> <br /> barun511 arvindr(41) attacked wikid, and did 21 damage. wikid had 53 HP left.<br /> <br /> <br /> You have married Assilim!
Apollodorus [SLOW]
Actually it should read:

majykhobbit has declined your request for the Stemosaurus tail spike [2 Aim] at Port Senyn.

or

majykhobbit has declined the Stemosaurus tail spike [2 Aim] you requested at Port Senyn.

Edited on 19-04-2013 20:46
Treize [C.]
The Manual says Witch cauldron requires level 1, but I just clicked on mine and..

"You can not equip your Witch cauldron because you need level 60 cooking to wear it."
Trades in everything everywhere.. well, almost..
JackGrimm [Fangz]
In the fishing section of the manual, where it shows where a bone rod is used has a double block.
You merely adopted the lag, I was born with it!<br /> <br /> /)<br /> *Brohoof*
Zebby [CFH]
not really a spelling mistake and it might not be changeable.
from page 1
"Moderator edit:
No item names can be changed >"
but would like to see silver ores instead of just silver for easy searching
Cheech: Man, if you had a second brain, it would die of loneliness, man.<br /> <br /> Want to see a magic trick<br /> I can turn this roll in to piece of fruit.<br /> Puts roll in a napkin and twists it up.<br /> Ain't that a Peach :D
The Grim Reaper [Egg]
There is 27839 Cooked Cod, 377 Cod and 7946 Wood in the stockhouse. left.
whats with the fullstop after stock house and then a random "left."
Fatty [~FaM~]
On the map when standing at Exella Mountain is says Exalla Mountain
www.fatboyzcaraudio.com<br /> 2012-08-23 16:33:23 Fatty killed a_f_c<br /> 2012-11-28 17:56:54 Fatty killed whelpers<br /> Married Kat 2/13/2008
barun511 [*TF*]
From player: The Fellowship
Sent on: 2013-04-19 19:31

Topic: Item approval
majykhobbit has declined Stemosaurus tail spike [2 Aim] for you at Port Senyn
[W]16:04 BlackLoter[Core]: k, will try eckwal<br /> [W]16:04 BlackLoter[Core]: heard there are monsters there<br /> W]16:04 BlackLoter[Core]: hope it's safe<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> You have married Assilim!
Nipper [-TL-]
At the Elven flower shop the bouquet of Purple Rha's is for apologies, but it is currently spelled "Appologies".
You have married Z3ll! 28th Nov 2011<br /> <br /> [3]01:29 Bassman[-TL-]: Everyone is afraid of nipper..<br /> <br /> [3]00:01 incubusking[-TL-]: the spawn of Z3 and nipper crashed the game what will the the next one do
ooF [=SoA=]
In the clan forums it says...
Add an category:
it should be...
Add a category:
Proud leader of =SoA=<br /> <br /> [3]05:46 MsZakou[HR]: You died attacking foozard at The Outlands 28. <br /> <br /> The Waranerus died. All warriors got 333 experience in attack, defence, strength and health.<br /> foozard got 1 Saurus scale!
fraggelmupp [TLO]
following on from foozards comment ....

In clan forums it says

Last 20 reply's grouped by topic

should be

Last 20 replies grouped by topic
Proud Leader of ~TLO~<br /> <br /> manducare primum, cogitare post<br /> <br /> &quot;The name's Muffin. Fraggelmuffin.&quot;<br /> &quot;Seeds, not grown.&quot;
Makeshift [Choob]
Change your forum signature
Your signature was too long!
Forum signature: (max. 250 chars)

This is incorrect. The maximum is 229. Example:
24/07/13
03:35 (Mod)Moderator: Player with inapprpriate name - muted.. the rest of you, time to stop repeating it ;)
03:35 Thorntree[Choob]: *innapropiate
03:40 Makeshift[Choob]: *Cough* Inappropriate*. TT spelled it wrong too.12
24/07/13<br /> 03:35 (Mod)Moderator: Player with inapprpriate name - muted.. the rest of you, time to stop repeating it ;)<br /> 03:35 Thorntree[Choob]: *innapropiate<br /> 03:40 Makeshift[Choob]: *Cough* Inappropriate*. TT spelled it wrong too.12
Hazgod [-TL-]
250 is correct if you have no line feeds. Each new line gets changed to 4 characters the count only sees it as 1
Critical hit: You struck and dealt 73 damage to the White bat.<br /> <br /> 03/02/2012 - [3]03:44 Our stockhouse at Burning beach has been upgraded to 50000 slots!<br /> <br /> [3]03:07 Shinobi requested 714.2 Cooked Cod from Burning beach
Makeshift [Choob]
Haz: Oh, I see! That makes sense.
24/07/13<br /> 03:35 (Mod)Moderator: Player with inapprpriate name - muted.. the rest of you, time to stop repeating it ;)<br /> 03:35 Thorntree[Choob]: *innapropiate<br /> 03:40 Makeshift[Choob]: *Cough* Inappropriate*. TT spelled it wrong too.
Cast []
When trying to escape the pirates and failing:

A pirate spotted you trying to escape! You are sent to jail. Continue


You are sent to jail.
*You have been sent to jail.
Joined: May 21, 2005
HellHound [~X~]
Your Saurus shield was damaged, the durabilty bonus was reduced by one.


Durability got its I poked out. Please help find it. Missing an I is detrimental to ones self image.
Treize [C.]
Penteza > Elven shop

"Welcome to Pentezas shop. We have got some valuable stuff for sale."

That doesn't sound right
Having an extensive portfolio of assets benefits, firstly, the investor by protecting them from unexpected price fluctuations; and secondly, the wider economy as the responsible investor protects the sustainability of trading in the relevant markets.
Treize [C.]
Penteza > Elven shop

"Welcome to Pentezas shop. We have got some valuable stuff for sale."

That doesn't sound right. Perhaps call it 'Elven shop' in the description as well for uniformity?
Having an extensive portfolio of assets benefits, firstly, the investor by protecting them from unexpected price fluctuations; and secondly, the wider economy as the responsible investor protects the sustainability of trading in the relevant markets.
Mr Coffee [TSoH]
You could not thief Halloween witch since Halloween witch is not at Unera (any more).

anymore should be one word, not 2

You could not thief Halloween witch since Halloween witch is not at Unera (anymore).
Proud Owner of the Golden Hoe<br /> 8th Member of the 1000 TL club<br /> &quot;Happiness is a full iggy&quot;<br /> [5] 20:50 (Mod)Moderator: ^what Prometheus said <br /> TSoH 4 Life!
dev1noodle [R-o-D]
There is * Cooked Mackerel, * Mackerel and * Wood in the stockhouse. left.

two periods (starring the numbers so as not to ruin our pirate fun ;)

Edited on 13-11-2013 05:04
Blaidd_Drwg [TxN]
You could not thief Halloween witch since Halloween witch is not at Unera

It actually should be Thieve. and a comma inserted

You could not Thieve the Halloween witch , since the Halloween witch is not at Unera
majykhobbit [*TF*]
This goes along with what Blaidd said and I don't know why I haven't mentioned it before because it bothers me every time I thieve someone

"Thief ShapeShifter"

It should be "Thieve Shapeshifter"

Edited on 13-11-2013 07:23
haajykhaobbiet drank Keg of ruh*burp*and gaiened 1 HP<br /> You cut down a hollow tree, a 14 was hidden inside it!<br /> <br /> Thieving (#222) 10/28/12<br /> Thieving (#1000) 4/28/12
Mr Coffee [TSoH]
In Guide Rules:

Syrnia policy, 2013, for (Guide)

S/B Syrnia (Guide) Policy: 2013


5th Paragraph...

This will ensure that the player who presents the question isn�t confused as to which answer is theirs, from the answers being given in Game Help.

Fix the MS Word gobbledygook isn�t to isn't
Proud Owner of the Golden Hoe<br /> 8th Member of the 1000 TL club<br /> &quot;Happiness is a full iggy&quot;<br /> [5] 20:50 (Mod)Moderator: ^what Prometheus said <br /> TSoH 4 Life!
LordRTM []
At Sanfew Jail there is a capitalization error.

Text below taken from Sanfew Jail description:
Got nothing left? you can clean the Sanfew cells for 2 gold pieces per minute.

The "you" should be capitalized.

LordRTM
manrobert [SiaN!]
Is "manrobert ate Beet and gained 1 HP"
What I think it should be "manrobert ate a Beet and gained 1 HP"
LordRTM [COURT]
I am sure my stuff is still around in the Outlands. The people who attacked me are rich enough to buy beter equipment, they only wanted revenge.

At Valera, beter.

Lord RTM
COURT
Civilian
Kairuku [R-o-D]
Yesterday I remember seeing quest text saying "trow" gnomes rather than "throw" gnomes on Penteza.

Edited on 24-01-2014 19:31
Xero [ExRo]
You have 458 Iron plate, you have 198 Iron bars left.
Leader of clan ~ExRo~<br /> <br /> Always accepting new members! just send a mail letting me know why we should have you in our family!
Hxde []
You can have this acient sword...

Should be ..............You can have this ANCIENT sword...

Valera Quest- Slaying the monster
matty [~FaM~]
Elven floral boutique:
bouquet is spelled bouquette
Sels [-DRS-]
From the first post

Item names and city names can not be changed

Edited on 21-02-2014 19:43
Have lived a very fun filled life with the grains of salt that make you appreciate the laughter and the love of family and friends<br /> <br /> dreamer349 April '09<br /> The Creator of Fish head Soup<br /> Maranda March '13<br /> My Dear Sis
majykhobbit [*TF*]
Buying a Purple rha bouquette for 100 gold.
For occasion: Appologies.

Also on the main House of Floral list under occasion.

"Appologies" should be "Apologies"
haajykhaobbiet drank Keg of ruh*burp*and gaiened 1 HP<br /> You cut down a hollow tree, a 14 was hidden inside it!<br /> <br /> Thieving (#19) 2/20/14<br /> Thieving (#222) 10/28/12<br /> Thieving (#1000) 4/28/12
Calvin []
Noticed this when I started playing. Tutorial 9:

"It's now up to you to decide what you will be doing with your Syrnian live!"
Live should be changed to life.

"Want to become a pirate and send pirates to Kill other Syrnians ?"
I believe the K in kill is currently capitalized. If it is, it should be lower case.
Cast [Choob]
There is 85 Cooked Mackerel, 2004 Mackerel and 49908 Wood in the stockhouse. left.

Shouldn't be a period after stockhouse.
Joined: May 21, 2005<br /> <br /> &quot;You rarely have time for everything you want in this life, so you need to make choices. And hopefully your choices can come from a deep sense of who you are.&quot;<br /> -Fred Rogers
C4LV1N [SWC]
"The current fight has been cancelled, the combatants took to long to kill eachother."

This should read (2 corrections):

"The current fight has been cancelled, the combatants took too long to kill each other."
And [Core]
[1]03:35 An evil mage summoned a Abominable snowman at Avinin.
pretty sure it's AN not A Abominable snowman
And [AFK]
[3]19:44 And[AFK]: You successfully escaped the pirate island... But they are not happy with you at Remer islands either
[3]19:44 And[AFK]: they recognise you as ex-pirate and send you to jail. If you've done your jailtime you can return to Remer islands with a clean slate.
[3]19:44 And[AFK]: pretty sure it's recognize, not recognise...
Karisade [TLO]
And - 'recognise' is the correct English spelling, whilst 'recognize' is the correct American English spelling.
[2]00:19 Restrict[#Anon]: havent you all realized? typo knows all &lt;3
Lodes [Feud]
You found 4 White Remer while walking!

shouldnt it be 4 White Remers? (plural)
Jeffamere [~ADV~]
I need to question why item names cannot be updated, EG:

string query = "UPDATE items SET name='Fixed up name' WHERE name='incorrect name'";

etc.

Also, "access" is missing an "s" at Elven Gate.
-Joined Fri Feb 8 2008 @ 21:54-<br /> [2]04:44 (Mod)Moderator: ok redcap you can now do us both a favor and poke me in the eyes now
teohweichin [Zen]
Not sure if this has been noted or not, but since it hasn't been fixed for ages...

Rose Mine description (when you click on Rose Mine):

Named after the city that uses this mine for (it's) rich iron and coal veins.The city guards watch carefully to protect the miners here so they can work in peace.

Should be: Named after the city that uses this mine for (its) rich iron and coal veins.The city guards watch carefully to protect the miners here so they can work in peace.
Tater [Joker]
Elven Floral, The apology flower is spelled wrong
i mustache you to not make fun of me<br /> <br /> You have married piranhattack! 2/24/15
JackGrimm [CFH]
In the Mini-map (Exalla mountain)
http://www.syrnia.com/images/map/Exella%20mountain.jpg

Everywhere else shows Exella
http://www.syrnia.com/images/worldmap6.jpg

You just need an updated image with Exella in the Mini-map

Also change http://www.syrnia.com/images/map/Exella%20plain.jpg

Edited on 08-04-2015 12:31
Current: A-65 D-41 S-40 H-52<br /> Goal 1: Att 66 (Gold Axe)<br /> Goal 2: Str 52 (Max of 34 with GA)<br /> Goal 3: Def 64 (Baby Gold)<br /> Goal 4: Att 70 (P-Hook/Plat Dagger)<br /> Goal 5: Health 60 (69 hp)<br /> Goal 6: Def 69 (full gold)
JackGrimm [CFH]
http://www.syrnia.com/index.php?page=manual&m= Begin

In the Want to mine ? section there is a random 1. at the bottom
40 Critical hit: You struck and dealt 40 damage to the Gnome. 0/7<br /> <br /> You stole 220 gold from Jack Black<br /> You stole 63 gold from TheJack<br /> You stole 2 gold from JackJackJack<br /> You stole 1 gold from Jack Almighty
Muto [C.]
this has probably been mentioned but if not...


All Silver barss are currently being worked on, so you are unable to join the work.
JackGrimm [CFH]
You have divorced. Ankit has been sent a notification, you might want to send him/her a personal message too?

It's not a question, remove the "?"
You stole 220 gold from Jack Black<br /> You stole 63 gold from TheJack<br /> You stole 11 gold from Jack Gold<br /> You stole 2 gold from JackJackJack<br /> You stole 1 gold from Jack Almighty
Ignis Vi [TLO]
While mining, you found a Amber gem!

an*
[2]01:14 That_Guy[Drunk]: They talk nonsense, are entertained with themselves, and vomit all over the place... babies sound drunk to me :)
Fabius [CDC]
My Mining Levels Shows only lv 87...but I´m lv 120 :o

Fix this please. Thank you
teohweichin [Zen]
Main World Forum:

Clans
Alliance's/War's and other clan affairs

Should be:
Clans
Alliances/Wars and other clan affairs
Someone [AFK]
"for example10 logs of wood require 10 slots"
Should have^ a space there - in http://www.syrnia.com/?page=manual&manual=constructing

Edited on 22-05-2016 16:22
mordaq the kitty [-*-]
The link to fight at Ogre Outpost reads "Fight the outpost" when it should read "Fight at the outpost"
C4LV1N [SWC]
"You've already recieved your Trick or Treat, come back next year."

'I' before 'E', except after 'C'...
Ner0 [~X~]
When Working in the Pirate Stock House

cooking Herring.

There is 2938 Cooked Herring, 4442 Herring and 663285 Wood in the stockhouse. left.

issue?

surely there is no need for a full stop after stockhouse also looks like there is a double space before left.

this is also for Mackerel and Cod but Smelting appears to be fine.

Edited on 28-11-2016 13:24
Two roads diverged in the wood and I, I took the one less travelled by, and that has made all the difference.<br /> <br /> www.TLGrounds.com, the #1 resource for Syrnia information
Nipper [TAG]
"All Uneras are currently being worked on, so you are unable to join the work."

Woodcutting event at Unera, at the end of the event it showed the message above which does not make sense. Surely it should say "All the wood is being cut, so you are unable to join", or words to that effect?
You have married Z3ll! 28th Nov 2011<br /> <br /> [3]01:29 Bassman[-TL-]: Everyone is afraid of nipper..<br /> <br /> [3]00:01 incubusking[-TL-]: the spawn of Z3 and nipper crashed the game what will the the next one do
Max [CFH]
Teps lunchbox is referred to as Teds in the quest spoilers (where you highlight it)

Could be the key... or something else, but one of them lists him as ted
Love, Tele
Golly Gee [_____]
At Valera when accepting the quest with the sobbing fighter:

"The people who attacked me are rich enough to buy beter equipment, they only wanted revenge."

Should be better with two tees
Muto [C.]
After a woodcutting event.

All Lemo woodss are currently being worked on, so you are unable to join the work.
Thorn [CFH]
teohweichin
[Zen]
03-03-2015 02:58


Not sure if this has been noted or not, but since it hasn't been fixed for ages...

Rose Mine description (when you click on Rose Mine):

Named after the city that uses this mine for (it's) rich iron and coal veins.The city guards watch carefully to protect the miners here so they can work in peace.

Should be: Named after the city that uses this mine for (its) rich iron and coal veins.The city guards watch carefully to protect the miners here so they can work in peace.

----------------------------------------------------------------------

This is a c/p of an earlier post, I was just perusing the thread when I noticed this.
I have no idea if the typo was fixed or not, however it does seem the text wasn't updated when silver mining was introduced there, as there is no mention in the flavour text .

Edited on 26-01-2017 23:02
*Bites*<br /> [3]20:29 (Mod)Ibiss[Order]: *Judo chops Thorn*<br /> There are 66666 Halloween gnomes left.<br /> (Mod)Borneo[C.]: we didnt fail Arioch...we were simply misunderstood<br /> <br /> [2]17:31 (Mod)Moderator: *hands thorn a cookie*
syterth [-TMP-]
I don't know if this has been addressed:

Current:
"Your Ogre gloves was destroyed while fighting. It was unrepairable and removed from your inventory."

Change:
Your Ogre gloves **were** destroyed while fighting. **They were** unrepairable and removed from your inventory.
Solunar [Choob]
^ The above is correct but hard to implement, given that the actual name of the item is 'Ogre Gloves'. The game identifies each item individually.

Edited on 22-02-2017 01:36
&lt;--- OL Fodder<br /> <br /> [W] 06:33 Doctor Noxious[A.D.]: and 100 players. thanks for being only my 100th :D<br /> <br /> [To: doctor noxious] 06:34 Solunar[Choob]: Thank you for being my 100th player killer
Baspall [O.G.]
This is not a "spelling" mistake, but it is wrong info in game manual...
In smithing section it states that you can smith items up to puranium in Arch Caves #5.13 ....while you can't smith anything down there, only smelt.
Monk [World]
An Cave of trades runner tells you:

Should be 'A Cave of trades runner tells you:'
C4LV1N [SWC]
The username you've tried to login with has been freezed by the game staff.
You should have recieved a message/email about this.

Should be:

The username you've tried to login with has been frozen by the game staff.
You should have received a message/email about this.
Lag [World]
This path gains you acces to the Elven island, it used to be blocked because of a war between ogres and elves.



access needs another s, pretty obvious where this one is... in the town writeup
Gaz [Zen]
The Sorer queen died. You got 37 strength experience.
You got 1 Beet seeds!

As its only 1 seed it should be
You got 1 Beet seed!
Solunar [Choob]
^ You are correct, but item names cannot be changed. The item name is "Beet Seeds" and so cannot be changed.
&lt;--- OL Fodder<br /> <br /> [W] 06:33 Doctor Noxious[A.D.]: and 100 players. thanks for being only my 100th :D<br /> <br /> [To: doctor noxious] 06:34 Solunar[Choob]: Thank you for being my 100th player killer
Loki [TLO]
Fighting a single Vaiva Elanori is spelt incorrectly at Exella plains. It should be spelt : Vaiva Elanor (singular)

The Vaiva Elanori died. You got 49 health experience.
The Vaiva Elanori dropped 1 Gold!


All incorrect spelling and also incorrect in the fight screen.

Vaiva Elanor skeleton! (correct spelling)


"Vaiva Elanor is the name of the elf, Vaiva Elanori is plural." Cheers Karisade for clearing that up.

This skeleton as well :

McGoggins expedition skeleton!

Should be McGoogins expedition skeleton
Blessed are we who can laugh at ourselves for we shall never cease to be amused.<br /> <br /> Good Girls go to Heaven,<br /> Bad Girls go to Asgard with Loki.
Bex [TLO]
There are 985 Vaiva Elanoris left. Attack (59988 minutes left until capture.)

or Fight the Vaiva Elanoris

There are 985 Vaiva Elanoris left.

Vaiva Elanori is plural so there should be no S on the end.
[3]12:21 fraggelmupp[TLO]: cant believe i agree with bex, but she is right!<br /> <br /> [2] 06:58 Borneo[C.]: Bexy is a rockstar
Raj [Corps]
Rajnish5622 ate Cooked Trouts and gained 7 HP
Shouldn't it be ate a cooked trout and gained 7 hp
Bex [TLO]
[5] 06:23 Torax: it tells you to click on tutorial 5, while you're already on tutorial 5 ready to go to tutorial 6
[5] 06:23 Torax: it's like that for all of them, 1 number behind
[3]12:21 fraggelmupp[TLO]: cant believe i agree with bex, but she is right!<br /> <br /> [2] 06:58 Borneo[C.]: Bexy is a rockstar
Pendragon [*TF*]
This will be my favorite thread very soon.
Odoacer [~one~]
Amber Fabrege Egg 2018
Garnet Fabrege Egg 2018
Diaspore Fabrege Egg 2018

It should be spelt Faberge .
24/01/2017 Congratulations! You've gained a mining level (100)<br /> <br /> 05/01/2018 Congratulations! You've gained an attack level (111)
Vermin [World]
There are 17403 Rabid bunnys left.
Joh [O.G.]
There is 16935 Cooked Salmon, 1875 Salmon and 93102 Wood in the stockhouse. left.

An extra fullstop, also smelting is worded completely differently to cooking:
You have 88308 Iron bars, you have 3279 Iron ore left.
36th player to hit level 120 mining - 07/06/2013<br /> <br /> Top 20 miner as of 23/11/2013 :)
Isaac [AdC]
You got 1 Eggplant seeds! <- spelling mistake

should be eggplant seed, but I understand that this is probably hard to solve as the name of the item is probably eggplant seeds
Astute [~Pod~]
Thanks alot.
I can finally train and become mighty and feared again !
Keep this sword, as a thanks for your help.


space between again and ! should not be there

Edit: monster training quest text also has this problem

(valera knight, quest completion text)

Edited on 23-10-2018 23:05
John [CLEAN]
"Welcome to Syrnia John! The chat is loading."

Can we put a "," after "Syrnia"?
Odoacer [~one~]
City description of Wingmere:

"Enjoy the jewel of Exrolia, this coast isn't very deep, some say there are fish here with wings.
If you are experienced enough you will also be able to cook here."

That should be spelt "Exrollia".

Edited on 17-04-2019 04:18
[3] 18:38 Foxy[~one~]: *pushes all out of the way* no squishing my son &gt;:(<br /> <br /> 2019-02-11<br /> [3] 20:21 Integral[~one~]: Congratulations! You've gained a mining level (120)
Odoacer [~one~]
Have fun in Valera!. [sic]

There should not be a full stop after the exclamation mark.
[3] 18:38 Foxy[~one~]: *pushes all out of the way* no squishing my son &gt;:(<br /> <br /> 2019-02-11<br /> [3] 20:21 Integral[~one~]: Congratulations! You've gained a mining level (120)
Odoacer [~one~]
"Have fun in Valera!."

There should not be a full stop after the exclamation mark.
[3] 18:38 Foxy[~one~]: *pushes all out of the way* no squishing my son &gt;:(<br /> <br /> 2019-02-11<br /> [3] 20:21 Integral[~one~]: Congratulations! You've gained a mining level (120)
St0rmz_ [*TF*]
Welcome to The Thieving Guild.

You are member of The Thieving Guild and can now receive jobs.

Ask the thieving guild for a job.

Should it not say:

You are a member of The Thieving Guild and can now receive jobs.
[0] 06:01 Myzad: The corpses of Peglegs are all that remain at Pensax after being hit by a St0rmz_<br /> <br /> [0] 01:36 Myzad: All pirates fear St0rmz_ and with good reason after what he did to the Peglegs.
Liah [CLEAN]
At the end of the woodcut event in Avinin this was the message:

Avinin

All Penteza forests are currently being worked on, so you are unable to join the work.

You should now wait until the 5 workers finish...


Why does it mention 'All Penteza forests', we are at Avinin and there is only 1 forest here.
We can only be who we are, no more, no less
Odoacer [~one~]
Moving to Arch. cave 5.7 takes you 12 seconds you will gain no experience because you are using a White horse.

Not sure if it can be fixed, but this is a run-on sentence. There should be a comma after "seconds" and before "you", if this is meant to be one sentence.
[3] 18:38 Foxy[~one~]: *pushes all out of the way* no squishing my son &gt;:(<br /> <br /> 2019-02-11<br /> [3] 20:21 Integral[~one~]: Congratulations! You've gained a mining level (120)
Vampyre [*TF*]
"You can try recruit pirates in this pub," should read "You can try TO recruit pirates in this pub," OR "You can try RECRUITING pirates in this pub," (From Greenbeard Saloon in Skull's Nose on Skull Island)

Either or fix would make it correct.
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Odoacer [~one~]
Trying to fish at Thabis without a net or rod equipped:

"Check if you've equiped the right tools (e.g. a Net or a Rod)"

Equipped is misspelt, and there is no period to end the sentence.
[3] 18:38 Foxy[~one~]: *pushes all out of the way* no squishing my son &gt;:(<br /> <br /> 2019-02-11<br /> Congratulations! You've gained a mining level (120)<br /> <br /> 2019-09-08<br /> Congratulations! You've gained an attack level (142)
Thiel [Corps]
Eylsian Docks fishing event:

"A kraken it ripping trawlers from the surface to their watery graves. Careful what you drag up with your nets. Happy Halloween!"

A kraken is ripping... I assume.

Edited on 29-10-2019 13:36

Edited on 29-10-2019 13:37
aussiebeast [~FoS~]
While searching for toy pieces
You found a: Gaman vodka
However you couldnt resist and drank it!

couldn't
Why would I shoot a bloke BANG, then carry him to the bloody car and wizz him off to the hospital at a hundred miles an hour? It defeats the purpose of having shot him in the first place.
Blackout Vision [~ADV~]
There is an Grumpyclaus invasion at Mentan.

should be a not an

also its already been killed but it says an Krampus, should also be a.
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TermaMatrix [Corps]
There are 15209 Grumpyclauss left.

Should there be 2 's' there?
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Calvin []
The player name 'Bex'.

Should read 'Backstabber'.



Please find below a secure link to an updated Syrnia blog, detailing mod corruption from 2009 to 2020.

https://truthwilloutcrusader.blogspot.com

Eevee [TLO]
Not sure if reported yet. But Bard in Rose Gates says Greatfull instead of Grateful before you accept his quest.
Savage [LoC]
The Elder Eagle died. You got 44 attack experience.

You got 1 Trouts!

Surely; You got 1 Trout!
Miknah [Hobos]
There are 1197 Lizardwomans left.
Odoacer [~one~]
Item names are in the database so I can't change stuff like "Looks like an animal hid some seeds in the tree, you got 1 Carrot seeds." The item is called Carrot seeds, I can't make that say 1 carrot seed. Same goes for x cooked shrimps. The item is called cooked shrimps.

I'm pretty sure it's the same case with NPC and town names.

Edited on 11-04-2020 20:01
[3] 18:38 Foxy[~one~]: *pushes all out of the way* no squishing my son &gt;:(<br /> <br /> 120 mining: 2019-02-11<br /> 142 attack: 2019-09-08<br /> 140 mining: 2019-12-22<br /> <br /> Mining level: 156 (50000000 exp, 403263 for next level)
Jeffamere [~ADV~]
Ammon - "the" twice in a row

"Only a wise man from the golden era of Anasco Island can help you figure out the way to the the legendary forest of Ammon. Find Bekenkhonsu to aid you on your quest."

Ammon (same starting quest) - Grammar
"Yes, I do!" should be "Yes, I will/shall"
(Or "Go to see him?" should be "Want to go see him?" etc)

It is rumoured Bekenknonsu was last see in Beset. Go to see him?

Yes, I do!

Edited on 17-05-2020 00:42
Watch this heartless Redcap, 'cos he'd rather see you dead.<br /> He'd love to squeeze out all yer blood, then put it on his head!<br /> <br /> <br /> -Joined Fri Feb 8 2008 @ 21:54-
Odoacer [~one~]
Rima city guard: "HALT, because you are not from around you need a Rima gate pass to enter!
You can buy a Rima gate pass for 5000 gold."

Shouldn't it be:
Rima city guard: "HALT, because you are not from around here, you need a Rima gate pass to enter!
[3] 18:38 Foxy[~one~]: *pushes all out of the way* no squishing my son &gt;:(<br /> <br /> 120 mining: 2019-02-11<br /> 142 attack: 2019-09-08<br /> 140 mining: 2019-12-22<br /> <br /> Mining level: 156 (50000000 exp, 403263 for next level)
Uzumaki [TSoH]
Shouldn't it be 'Since you are not from around here'? Seems like better flow.
Odoacer [~one~]
Eckwal:
"You can mine here but there is a big bird who is afraid you will hurt his eggs, you will know when you are to close to them..."

Should be:
"You can mine here but there is a big bird who is afraid you will hurt his eggs, you will know when you are too close to them..."
[3] 18:38 Foxy[~one~]: *pushes all out of the way* no squishing my son &gt;:(<br /> <br /> 120 mining: 2019-02-11<br /> 140 mining: 2019-12-22<br /> 170 mining: 2020-06-12<br /> <br /> Mining level: 156 (50000000 exp, 403263 for next level)
Maggie [CLEAN]
You Give your Ringtail lemur some food and watch them run in circles!

to:

You give your Ringtail Lemur some food and watch 'it' run in circles!
I'm Clean!
Maggie [CLEAN]
Some of your crops were mysteriously missing! You found 6 fewer Carrots than you expected to harvest.
You have harvested your crop, you gained 44 farming experience.

TO:

Some of your crop was mysteriously missing! You found 6 fewer Carrots than you expected to harvest.
You have harvested your crop, you gained 44 farming experience.
I'm Clean!
Miknah [Hobos]
"This lava lake has been used to smelt powerfull metal for ages."

Powerful is mis-spelled.
Maggie [CLEAN]
Barnacle bay - Bay should be capitalised as it is part of the name of a place.
I'm Clean!<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> _______________
Odoacer [~one~]
"Item names and city names CAN NOT BE CHANGED"
[3] 18:38 Foxy[~one~]: *pushes all out of the way* no squishing my son &gt;:(<br /> <br /> 120 mining: 2019-02-11<br /> 140 mining: 2019-12-22<br /> 170 mining: 2020-06-12<br /> <br /> Mining level: 156 (50000000 exp, 403263 for next level)
Maggie [CLEAN]
Previously:

Muto
[C.]
26-01-2017 18:20



After a woodcutting event.

All Lemo woodss are currently being worked on, so you are unable to join the work.

Moderator edit:
This is due to the type of Forest selected for the event and is not a typo, but Thank You for your comment

Obviously Mod missed the double [i]s[i/] on woodss.
I'm Clean!<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> _______________
Maggie [CLEAN]
Muto
[C.]
26-01-2017 18:20



After a woodcutting event.

All Lemo woodss are currently being worked on, so you are unable to join the work.

Moderator edit:
This is due to the type of Forest selected for the event and is not a typo, but Thank You for your comment

Obviously The Mod missed the double 's' on woods!
I'm Clean!<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> _______________
Bellatrix [*TF*]
Welcome to The Thieving Guild.

You seem fit enough to join our thieving guild. But we accept only the best thieves. Thieves should be able to stealth, move quick and should be able to known their locations.

I would like to do the thieving guild trail to join.
I do not want to be part of crime !
~~~
“known” and “crime !”
Bellatrix [*TF*]
All Lemo woodss are currently being worked on, so you are unable to join the work.

You should now wait until the 1 worker finishes...


^ was from a woodcutting event in Lemo woods
Odoacer [~one~]
Wingmere:
Enjoy the jewel of Exrolia, this coast isn't very deep, some say there are fish here with wings.
If you are experienced enough you will also be able to cook here.

The island's name is "Exrollia", with two l's.
[3] 18:38 Foxy[~one~]: *pushes all out of the way* no squishing my son &gt;:(<br /> <br /> 120 mining: 2019-02-11<br /> 140 mining: 2019-12-22<br /> 170 mining: 2020-06-12<br /> <br /> Mining level: 156 (50000000 exp, 403263 for next level)
Ragnar [-CR-]
There is 36958 Cooked Herring, 27433 Herring and 178262 Wood in the stockhouse. left


^ This has been like this forever. can someone finally take the "Left" off the end?
Proud Leader of Chaos Reborn [-CR-]<br /> <br /> You have married Elbaroda! 9-21-20
Ragnar [-CR-]
As proof to my last reply:


JackGrimm
[Fangz]
18-12-2012 12:39<--- Almost 8 years and still not fixed



There is 31450 Cooked Pike, 527 Pike and 31917 Wood in the stockhouse. left.

Edited on 18-11-2020 09:25
Proud Leader of Chaos Reborn [-CR-]<br /> <br /> You have married Elbaroda! 9-21-20
Satirical [Manc]
Tavern in castle rose after talking to the bard to start the quest:
Inspiration is spelled wrong.


"I hope you do succeed in finding some imspiration for love songs on this island."
JFizzle [~DoS~]
Maadi
You have not got enough magical powers yet to practise magic here.
Divinity [~ADV~]
Huppele Pub at Penteza.

You see an man drinking beer on his own..:

Oh hey you, I could tell you a tip helpfull for every warrior...
I will tell it to you if you get me 100 casino chips !
I need to throw some gnomes badly!
Ok, I'll get you the casino chips
Nah you should stop being addicted to gnome trowing !


It should be "a man", "helpful" and "throwing" instead of "an man", "helpfull" and "trowing".
Odoacer [~one~]
Your Wrapped tinderbox was damaged, the durabilty bonus was reduced by one.

That should be "durability".

Edited on 25-02-2021 00:23
[3] 18:38 Foxy[~one~]: *pushes all out of the way* no squishing my son &gt;:(<br /> <br /> 120 mining: 2019-02-11<br /> 140 mining: 2019-12-22<br /> 170 mining: 2020-06-12<br /> <br /> Mining level: 156 (50000000 exp, 403263 for next level)
Cast [CFH]
Skull Nose (city-text):

Skulls nose is the largest city on Skull Island, and the home town of Pirate Keelhail. Many aspiring pirates come here to see if they have what it takes to become a full-fledged pirate. The popular Greenbeard Saloon is also located here, where bar fights are a daily routine. The Skull Island jail is also found here, almost always at full capacity from the lawless pirate who inhabit the island. The noisest place on the island is the stockhouse, where pirates prepare for their next plundering adventure.


"lawless pirate who inhabit"
Should be
"lawless pirates who inhabit"
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Maddness [Manc]
At level 80 trade when attempting to continue study trading at Maadi it only reads “You can't learn any more about trading in here.”
The other universities tell you the next location to study at , for example at kanzo; “ You can't learn any more about trading in here, try Maadi instead.”
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oliver_queen [Cloud]
There are 233 Foxs left. Attack (59836 minutes left until capture.)

The singular of Fox is Fox. Many fox are refereed to foxes

SO CORRECTION (There are 233 Foxes left.)
Love All!<br /> All for one and One for all!!<br /> The Gnome died. You got 13 strength experience.<br /> You got 1 Syrnia Birthday Hat 2018!<br /> You dug up: Diamond shaped glass<br /> <br /> [5]05:01 (Mod)Moderator: Donald_Trump - muted
Odoacer [~one~]
"Item names and city names CAN NOT BE CHANGED"
[3] 18:38 Foxy[~one~]: *pushes all out of the way* no squishing my son &gt;:(<br /> <br /> 120 mining: 2019-02-11<br /> 140 mining: 2019-12-22<br /> 170 mining: 2020-06-12<br /> <br /> Mining level: 190 (100000000 exp, 248611 for next level)
oliver_queen [Cloud]
its neither a city name or a item name, its a misspelling more than one fox has a (E) not just a s (as in I have seen many FOXES
Love All!<br /> All for one and One for all!!<br /> The Gnome died. You got 13 strength experience.<br /> You got 1 Syrnia Birthday Hat 2018!<br /> You dug up: Diamond shaped glass<br /> <br /> [5]05:01 (Mod)Moderator: Donald_Trump - muted
Maggie [CLEAN]
[0] 15:01 The Egg Thief was seen sneaking off towards towards Elven island
[0] 14:46 The Egg Thief was seen sneaking off towards towards Mezno island
[0] 14:31 The Egg Thief was seen sneaking off towards towards Ogre cave
[0] 14:16 The Egg Thief was seen sneaking off towards towards Elven island

And so on all day.

Looks much better today - thank you!

[0]08:01 The Egg Thief was seen sneaking off towards Webbers island

Edited on 04-04-2021 08:13
I'm Clean!<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> <br /> 21 August 2020
Odoacer [~one~]
@oliver_queen

It's the same principle. The creature's name is displayed exactly as it is in the database. It's much easier to just tack on an 's' after the name than it is to create a new creature for every instance in which the grammar would be incorrect.

Edited on 04-04-2021 04:25
[3] 18:38 Foxy[~one~]: *pushes all out of the way* no squishing my son &gt;:(<br /> <br /> 120 mining: 2019-02-11<br /> 140 mining: 2019-12-22<br /> 170 mining: 2020-06-12<br /> <br /> Mining level: 190 (100000000 exp, 248611 for next level)
fraggelmupp [TLO]
Your Tiromyth axe was damaged, the durabilty bonus was reduced by one.

Durability spelt wrong.
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Yuuko [TLO]
On the manuals thieving page, Locked Ancient Chest has a spelling mistake for "chopping at khaya". Khaya is spelt incorrectly.
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Maggie [CLEAN]
Here you can barely move with how thick the brush is, out of nowhere you see huts through the trees and notice it is a village but unfortunately for you it's not of humans.

Edited on 16-10-2021 06:55
I'm Clean!<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> <br /> 21 August 2020
Cari [TLO]
In the Farming page of the manual, for buying land there are missing/ wrong commas

100 Slots 3000 5250
200 Slots 6,000 1,1250
400 Slots 1,2000 2,3250

should be

100 Slots 3,000 5,250
200 Slots 6,000 11,250
400 Slots 12,000 23,250
Common sense is a flower that doesn't grow in everyone's garden.
Solunar [Choob]
Remeber to come here and sign the guest book on:

Remember
~Sol~ :D<br /> <br /> You have married Thorne!<br /> 5th March 2020.
Gaz [Zen]
There are 4437 Halloween witchs left.
Should be Witches
Lodes [CLEAN]
On the map of Celebration Island

'Hallow Moutain' is missing an 'n'.


- While attacking the forest you found 1 Cucumber seeds
- While attacking the forest you found a Pumpkin seed

Edited on 01-11-2021 22:57
In Christ alone my hope is found. He is my light, my strength, my song.<br /> <br /> You have been playing Syrnia for 26280 hours and 0 minutes.
Maggie [CLEAN]
There is 25838 Cooked Mackerel, 44957 Mackerel and 78327 Wood in the stockhouse. left.

It's surely time for the 'left' to leave.
I'm Clean!<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> <br /> Joined: June 1, 2006
KingBatfink [Snake]
Caring for your Squirrel

You Play with your Squirrel and watch them run around...

A squirrel is a them...
[2] 19:46 Batfink[Snake]: I would love to visit OL but that would just be suicide, I might aswell stick my head in a lions mouth and flick its love spuds with a wet towel
Jeffamere [~ADV~]
In the event list, some creatures are listed as "an" when they should be "a".

Such as:

There is an Grumpyclaus invasion at
There is an Krampus at
Watch this heartless Redcap, 'cos he'd rather see you dead.<br /> He'd love to squeeze out all yer blood, then put it on his head!
AcupofJoe [CFH]
400 Slots 1,2000 2,3250
In the farming section of the manual I think its 12,000 23,250
BlndeRN13 [Manc]
There are 2469 Lynxs left.

Should either be Lynx or Lynxes.
Maggie [CLEAN]
The creature's name is displayed exactly as it is in the database. It's much easier to just tack on an 's' after the name than it is to create a new creature for every instance in which the grammar would be incorrect.
Woodcutter.<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> <br /> Joined: June 1, 2006
Savage [~FoS~]
Mount tirnus

No capital T on Tirnus, has a capital T on the world map.
meh [TSoH]
Anniversary fields

'F' should be capitalized.
Cookinglevel:105(12345678Cooking level: 124(66666666Cooking level: 172 (69696969Cooking level: 177 (77777777 expCooking level: 184 (88888888 exp<br /> Cooking level: 202 (123456789 exp,
Calliope [~FoS~]
There are 2102 Lizardwomans left.

Should be "Lizardwomen"
I love my US Navy sailor! Thanks to all who have served or are serving!<br /> <br /> [1]02:04 Cradle[~SaS~]: but the other speed items also decrease time? or do you have only boobs?<br /> <br /> You're missed, Farinsongteeth. Always.
Maggie [CLEAN]
Calli - the item is called 'Lizardwoman', so tis easier to just tack on an 's'.
They cannot change the name in the data base.
Woodcutter.<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> <br /> Joined: June 1, 2006
Calliope [~FoS~]
FORUM -> Clans
Description is "Alliance's / War's"

Should be "Alliances / Wars" without apostrophes.

Example:
That is the boy's backpack. (A backpack belonging to a boy, the 's indicating ownership.)

The boys have gone to play football. (Boys, without the apostrophe, indicating PLURAL - more than one - boy.)
I love my US Navy sailor! Thanks to all who have served or are serving!<br /> <br /> [1]02:04 Cradle[~SaS~]: but the other speed items also decrease time? or do you have only boobs?<br /> <br /> You're missed, Farinsongteeth. Always.
Maggie [CLEAN]
Got to love locks Easy
Must have completed Thieving guild trial quest.
Level 15 speed and 5 thieving.

'trial' should be 'trail.
Woodcutter.<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> <br /> Joined: June 1, 2006
Gardenia [Cloud]
there is a fishing event at osis lake that says
Rob & Net

I'm guessing it's supposed to say
Rod & Net
Savage [~Arc~]
There is 35375 Cooked Herring, 197 Herring and 155120 Wood in the stockhouse. left.
2022-02-20 02:53:24 Savage(108) did 53 damage to Darenth. Darenth had 0 HP left.<br /> <br /> 1/106 The Serpopard struck at you and did 10 damage.<br /> <br /> [0] 18:57 *Note to Self - Savage = no invasions* Got it!
Cari [TLO]
When clicking on the teddy bear.....

Green teddybear

You changed your cltohes and now its a Green teddybear!!

clothes, not cltohes
Common sense is a flower that doesn't grow in everyone's garden.
Spald [Vibes]
In the quest Earning The Family Respect on the rewards screen it says

You gained acces to the Ancestral mountains and the archeological cave.

acces should be access
Always look on the bright side of life!
Maggie [CLEAN]
The citizens of Crab nest started a contest: The one to collect the best Wood will be paid 10000 gold.
The second and thirth best entries will be paid out 5000 and 3333 gold.
The contest ends in 16 hours.

Thirth is not a word!The word you are looking for is THIRD!
Woodcutter.<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> <br /> Joined: June 1, 2006
Pendragon [*TF*]
I was planning on meticulously going through every bit of the hard-coded text and fixing all of the textual issues plaguing every bit and pixel of this game. However, because I am vocal against the terrible decisions often made by the mod team here, Cradle has refused me access back to dev to do one final good thing for us all.

Just another example of them shooting themselves in the foot.

I'd suggest not continuing to add spelling mistakes to this post, as nobody else will care enough about the game to put all the time it takes into fixing them.
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Savage [~Arc~]
Travel from Lost Caves 10 to 1...

Above you, you feel the familiar heat of Arch. cave 4...
Move up to the heat

Shouldn't that read 'Move down to the heat'
Savage(120) attacked nirvanaishdude, and did 64 damage. nirvanaishdude had 5 HP left.<br /> <br /> [0] 18:57 *Note to Self - Savage = no invasions* Got it!
Tintin2007 [Corps]
I disagree Savage if you're going from Arch 5 to Arch 4 you're leaving the cave system and heading higher up towards the surface.
&quot;Never in the field of human conflict was so much owed, by so many to so few.&quot; Winston Churchill
Greensky [Drunk]
Your Bouquette of Daffodils were delivered to x!

The verb should be "was" as bouquette is singular and "of daffodils" is a prepositional phrase that adds more information to bouquette but doesn't affect the tense of the verb.

Compare:

Your bouquette was delivered. (correct)
Your bouquette were delivered. (wrong)
If we're going to die, let's die looking like a Peruvian folk band.<br /> <br /> You want weapons? We're in a library! Books! The best weapons in the world!<br /> <br /> Bow ties are cool.
Maggie [CLEAN]
Rows and rows of timber can be found throughout the edges of this town. The wood is ideal for ship-building, and most of the pirate ships built at the harbor is made from Bonewood's forests.

Should read:

Rows and rows of timber can be found throughout the edges of this town. The wood is ideal for ship-building, and most of the pirate ships built at the harbor were made from Bonewood's forests.

Edited on 29-10-2023 08:23
Woodcutter.<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> <br /> Joined: June 1, 2006
Maggie [CLEAN]
Please be quick and give him thise message explaining him some stuff about burnt fish.
John Friddik gives you a Letter

thise - drop the 'e' off and you have 'this'

Also needs a full stop after Letter.

Please be quick and give him this message explaining to him some stuff about burnt fish.
John Friddik gives you a Letter.

Edited on 06-07-2023 22:23
Woodcutter.<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> <br /> Joined: June 1, 2006
Maggie [CLEAN]
Tom Friddik tells you: Ah a letter...let me read it..
...I can't eat burnt fish? I guess this is just a joke.
It looks very crunchy and tasty, so it should be eatable...

eatable...should be 'edible'

(fit or suitable to be eaten.)
Woodcutter.<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> <br /> Joined: June 1, 2006
Maggie [CLEAN]
Welcome to The Thieving Guild.

You are member of The Thieving Guild and can now receive jobs.

Should read:

Welcome to The Thieving Guild.

You are a member of The Thieving Guild and can now receive jobs.
Woodcutter.<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> <br /> Joined: June 1, 2006
Maggie [CLEAN]
IS: Here you can barely move with how thick the brush is here.Seemingly out of nowhere you see huts through the trees and notice it is a village but unfortunately for you it's not of humans.

Could be: Here you can barely move with how thick the brush is. Seemingly, out of nowhere you see huts through the trees and notice it is a village but unfortunately for you it's not of humans.

EDIT: This is at Thick Jungle on Serpenthelm Island.

Edited on 20-08-2023 09:15
Woodcutter.<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> <br /> Joined: June 1, 2006
Celasha [Moria]
Whoops

Edited on 11-07-2023 22:46
Cari [TLO]
Farming calculator .... Raddish should be Radish, Trunip should be Turnip
Common sense is a flower that doesn't grow in everyone's garden.
Sheep [TLO]
"All Gold barss are currently being worked on, so you are unable to join the work."

After gold smelting event.
[3]23:41 Kunzite[TLO]: i would think sis, a day with sheep would be like sunshine every day<br /> <br /> [3]21:58 Malekith[TLO]: Yeah that Sheep looks hot
Maggie [CLEAN]
You can try recruit pirates in this pub, recruit

Should be: You can try to recruit pirates in this pub, recruit
Woodcutter.<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> <br /> Joined: June 1, 2006
Maggie [CLEAN]
At the Pirate Stockhouse it says: We are attacking islands soon, therefore you cannot access the stockhouse at the moment.

The pirates are currently attacking SIX (6) towns already; so the above message is wrong.
Woodcutter.<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> <br /> Joined: June 1, 2006
MrWilford [Arch]
When attacking a Halloween witch (9) at Eully, I noticed that witch is plural it is spelled witchs which is incorrect. It should be witches.

There are 2531 Halloween witchs left.
Should be: There are 2531 Halloween witches left.
Maggie [CLEAN]
You are not Honest, Trustworthy or Honest!

Could be:

You are not Honest OR Trustworthy!

(Thieving the Captain on Celebration Island)
Woodcutter.<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> <br /> Joined: June 1, 2006
Maggie [CLEAN]
The Blood Assassin and his nightmares have vanished in the winds but was spotted heading to Serpenthelm island.

Should be:

The Blood Assassin and his nightmares have vanished in the winds but were spotted heading to Serpenthelm island.
Woodcutter.<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> <br /> Joined: June 1, 2006
Maggie [CLEAN]
The Blood Assassins left behind a few prizes to the following players
[0]08:31 Lag got a Blood assassin mask.
[0]08:31 sabinking got a Blood assassin gloves.
[0]08:31 Specter84 got a Halloween spider.
[0]08:31 The Blood Assassin and his nightmares have vanished in the winds but was spotted heading to Serpenthelm island

Should be:

The Blood Assassin left behind a few prizes to the following players (Singular - The Blood Assassin)
[0]08:31 Lag got a Blood assassin mask.
[0]08:31 sabinking got a Blood assassin gloves.
[0]08:31 Specter84 got a Halloween spider.
[0]08:31 The Blood Assassin and his nightmares have vanished in the winds but were spotted heading to Serpenthelm island.

Its ONE blood Assassin and his nightmares (plural)

Edited on 29-10-2023 08:50
Woodcutter.<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> <br /> Joined: June 1, 2006
oliver_queen [Vibes]
While harvesting you found 1 Apple seeds (shouldn't it be 1 Apple Seed (since one is plural)
Love All!<br /> <br /> The Gnome died. You got 13 strength experience.<br /> You got 1 Syrnia Birthday Hat 2018!<br /> <br /> [5]05:01 (Mod)Moderator: Donald_Trump - muted<br /> <br /> You've gained a cooking level (100)
Maggie [CLEAN]
Some of your crops were mysteriously missing! (as is)

Some of your crop was mysteriously missing! (Should be)

The word crop means your total crop in one field.
Woodcutter.<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> <br /> Joined: June 1, 2006
Maggie [CLEAN]
This is not a spelling mistake - but a mistake just the same:

Will you be the one who plunders the houses and robs the shops in Syrnia?

It appears on this page
https://www.syrnia.com/index.php?page=gametour
Woodcutter.<br /> <br /> You have married quagmire! <br /> 21 August 2020<br /> <br /> Joined: June 1, 2006
Dark Helmet [Arch]
“You do not have got enough gold to buy the Silver hatchet.”

The word “got” should be removed.
McLovin killed you at The Outlands 66.<br /> <br /> lilsweetheart tried to thieve you at Beset, but was caught on the crime scene and has been sent to jail for 150 seconds.
Ragnar [~CR~]
There is 6681 Cooked Salmon, 2316 Salmon and 98825 Wood in the stockhouse. left.


Longest running spelling error out there.

Edited on 23-12-2023 01:20
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Max [*ATF*]
In the fishing manual swordfish and shark are fished at 'Eylsian Docks'
Love, Tele
Odoacer [~one~]
That is correct, Telepathetic. Don't ask me why the location is spelt "Eylsian Docks" and not "Elysian Docks".
[2] 22:34 Mr Tiddles[CFH]: math is for dummies...<br /> <br /> bellabell3(266) attacked Shadowgate, and did 0 damage. Shadowgate had 73 HP left.
Odoacer [~one~]
That is the correct name of the location, Telepathetic. Don't ask me why it's spelt "Eylsian Docks" and not "Elysian Docks". It can't be changed.
[2] 22:34 Mr Tiddles[CFH]: math is for dummies...<br /> <br /> bellabell3(266) attacked Shadowgate, and did 0 damage. Shadowgate had 73 HP left.
Savage [~FoS~]
The fishing event failed, .
Help out (135 left)
Anarchy(156) attacked Fearn, and did 1 damage. Fearn had 3 HP left.<br /> <br /> [7] 13:59 LeMorse[Arch]: Fearn will always be Fearn... that's why everyone loves him so much!
St0rmz_ [*TF*]
Moving to McGoogins camp.

1 McGoggins expedition skeleton

One of them is wrong

Id say the latter?
M2H has payed 10780 gold to free you from the Sanfew jail.<br /> <br /> The corpses of Peglegs are all that remain at Pensax after being hit by a St0rmz_<br /> <br /> All pirates fear St0rmz_ and with good reason after what he did to the Peglegs.
king1104 [Pond]
You have 5408 Cooked Salmon shark, you have 4498 Salmon shark left. and 165561 Wood


At Toothen cooking Salmon Shark
May God have mercy on my enemies, for I shall not.<br /> <br /> I've been banned for less.<br /> <br /> My preferred adjectives are hot and lesbian.<br /> <br /> 25/12/2023<br /> [6]18:01 (Mod)Moderator: Sorry, but King is right
Odoacer [~one~]
Don't know if it can be changed, but Hallow Mountain is spelt "Hallow Moutain" on the travel map.

Edited on 23-11-2024 23:35
[2] 22:34 Mr Tiddles[CFH]: math is for dummies...<br /> <br /> xxx(xxx) attacked Shadowgate, and did 0 damage. Shadowgate had 73 HP left.
Calliope [~FoS~]
There are 1140 Halloween witchs left.

Should read: There are 1140 Halloween WITCHES left.
I love my US Navy sailor! Thanks to all who have served or are serving!<br /> <br /> [1]02:04 Cradle[~SaS~]: but the other speed items also decrease time? or do you have only boobs?<br /> <br /> You're missed, Farinsongteeth. Always.
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Odoacer [~one~]
In the Zamoye Jungle town menu, returning to Rameon during the "Wood you or you wood not?" quest:

Aproach a familiar man

It should be:

Approach a familiar man
[2] 22:34 Mr Tiddles[CFH]: math is for dummies...<br /> <br /> xxx(xxx) attacked Shadowgate, and did 0 damage. Shadowgate had 73 HP left.