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The Couch Yeti
[~L~]
24-05-2012 20:26



theking ate Black easter egg and gained 20 HP

theking ate a Black easter egg and gained 20 HP
My Skills Neglected, My Pockets Collected.
Pirates life has been selected, A liveliness dedicated.
Mr. Addy
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barun511
[Elves]
30-05-2012 19:44



Stop them of capturing this town and join the fight.

Stop them from capturing this town and join the fight. <-- Correction

Moderator edit:
Fixed

011-12-03 05:07:30 barun511 arvindr(43) attacked Ceba, and did 11 damage. Ceba had 0 HP left.

barun511 arvindr(41) attacked wikid, and did 21 damage. wikid had 53 HP left.


You have married Assilim!
ChaosControl
[=.=]
31-05-2012 04:39



In the clan Options page:

[Clan name and tag] currently have no stockhouses.

This should read:

[Clan name and tag] currently has no stockhouses.
[2]07:12 (Mod)Borneo[C.]: [3]07:11 (Mod)Borneo[C.]: well hello there ChaosControl
<3 Nice Mod Choobs :D
Karisade
[-DRS-]
10-07-2012 17:48



Further to incognito's post above^

"...you can better do that at Lisim!" would be more natural English as "...you can do that better at Lisim!"
[2]04:26 (Mod)Moderator: *slaps Karisade*
Treize
[C.]
12-07-2012 22:53



You successfully thieved in order of the thieving guild.

Change to: You successfully thieved [by] order of the Thieving guild.

Moderator edit:
Fixed

2012-07-09 01:05 Treize has declined Tulip for you at Elven gate D:
KingBatfink
[Snake]
17-07-2012 02:54



Also on thieving guild quests it says Thief xxxxxx, shouldnt it be Thieve xxxxxx

Edited on 17-07-2012 02:55

Moderator edit:
Fixed
VampiricWolf
[Choob]
31-07-2012 17:12


Your farmland is capable of holding 400 crops, you can seed 221 more crops.

Should either be:Your farmland is capable of holding 400 crops, you can plant 221 more crops. (so the Seed is changed to plant)

OR

Your farmland is capable of holding 400 crops, you can plant 221 more seeds. (so the seed is changed to plant and the crops is changed to seeds)
redhdsrbtr
[JADED]
01-08-2012 00:26



The act of planting is also seeding. To seed farmland is also gramaticaly correct.
"Mortal ears cannot bear to hear the roaring silence of the thundering quiet"

"It is good to be without vices, but it is not good to be without temptations"

Heart of Flame, Soul of Fire
JackGrimm
[~L~]
02-08-2012 10:53



In the manual -> speed.
Travel To all but Skull Island, Heerchey Island or Kanzo is free if you own a small fishing boat, Sloop, Boat or Trawler.

A Canoe is missing
2012-06-10 13:31 Levels: 40 - 49
Jack the Reaper won and got a Desert arena medal and 200 combat experience (3 players)
22ducky22
[=SoA=]
02-08-2012 16:29


On the main forum page:
"Clans
Alliance's/War's and other clan affairs"
should be:
"Clans
Alliances/Wars and other clan affairs"
Spooff
[~FoS~]
11-08-2012 00:08



When searching for items in a shop

Item Much Title Owner Location

should much be "quantity"
A Lie is a great Story someone ruined with the Truth - Barney Stinson

Annoying you since 14 Dec 2005
Hexis
[*TF*]
31-08-2012 19:09



The description of Kanzo is gramatically incorrect.

Named After the island itself. This town is Famous for the Magical Tower and for its high level in school training. On some nights during a lightning storm you can see a casted shadow on the tower. Some say it is White Wizard, but noone has ever say the figure of him.

Perhaps should read something like:

Named after the island itself, Kanzo is famous for it's Magical Tower and it's university. On some nights, during a lightning storm a shadow can be seen cast upon the tower. Some say it is the White Wizard, though none have ever seen him.
My superiority complex is waaay better than your's.


'I may be going to hell in a bucket babe, but at least I'm enjoying the ride' ~Grateful Dead
Blaidd_Drwg
[HR]
11-09-2012 09:32



I just noticed a double "take" on the pirate join screen at xanso

copy of what i seen there is below

The pirates are currently recruiting new members.
Do you want to join the evil side of Syrnia and plunder all islands?
Since we are in desperate need of recruits we will let you join if you take take 1 Keg of rum with you....
After joining the pirates you will not receive any rewards for invasions/events you've just participated in.
Join the pirates.

Moderator edit:
Fixed
Blaidd_Drwg
[HR]
11-09-2012 09:39



another one at Castle Rose

The city has a very nice smithing facility that is known for there great iron and steel works and it's free to use.

Should this not be "their" great iron and steel works....

Moderator edit:
Fixed
coolnes96
[~HaJ~]
17-09-2012 04:48


In the "Slaying the monster" quest it says:
Wow I never thought you would make it out alive !
Now I can tell everyone I have been training you to kill it. I finally get some fame wich I have always wanted.
People will be very excited to hear this adventure !
Thanks for helping me. I've reached what I want, i can stop fighting now.
You can have this acient sword... This was property of the army who created Valera ages ago...

Which and ancient are spelled wrong, a few parts of it are grammatically incorrect , and I is not capitalized.

It should be:
Wow, I never thought you would make it out alive !
Now I can tell everyone I have been training you to kill it. I finally get some fame, which I have always wanted.
People will be very excited to hear this adventure !
Thanks for helping me. I've reached what I want, I can stop fighting now.
You can have this ancient sword... This was property of the army who created Valera ages ago...
JackGrimm
[~L~]
01-10-2012 19:01



We are attacking islands soon, therefore you cannot access the stockhouse at the moment.
This is displayed in the stockhouse, after the pirates have been sent, and have captured.
You merely adopted the lag, I was born with it!
JackGrimm
[~L~]
02-10-2012 14:00



Welcome to Penteza's shop.
We have got some valuable stuff for sale.
You merely adopted the lag, I was born with it!
theking
[Cloud]
04-11-2012 04:14



You got 1 Iron legs!
I did not get more than one legs

Moderator edit:
Not changing, item name is iron legs

[5]00:00 jenilyn[Boo]: ty king ur much better than mods

[2]18:21 zephyrys: Hail to the King, baby!

[3]05:35 Divinity[Cloud]: Yes tk, you're amazing

TK4LIFE
fraggelmupp
[~TLO~]
06-11-2012 09:44



You have not have enough resources to continue building the clan stockhouse.

too many "haves" perhaps? should be

You do not have enough resources to continue building the clan stockhouse.

Moderator edit:
Fixed

Proud Leader of ~TLO~

manducare primum, cogitare post

"The name's Muffin. Fraggelmuffin."
"Seeds, not grown."
C4LV1N
[SWC]
24-11-2012 13:10


The descriptions for Arch. cave 4 could be improved grammatically. Some of these are grammatically important, others I just think make it read better...

4.2 (Tempa's tent):
"I do pretty well down here,; there is enough water in the dampy cave systems and I kill the dinosaurs for the their meat their and precious scales and hides.
"Crafting a lot of scales and hides, I learned how to create very powerfull Saurus armour,; I began learning to crafting hide using the bat hides."

4.7:
""The lava is hot enough to smelt various ores into bars, it is although it is too hot for bronze.
"Smelt iron bars
"Smelt steel bars
"Smelt gold bars

"The current circumstances at this location are perfect to smelt platina.
"In this environment it costs you 8 platina ore, 6 gold ore and 4 coal ore to create one platina bar.
"The costs could differ change if the environment changes, but it has been stable so far...
"Smelt platina bars

"The conditions are even well enough adequate for Syriet! But if this'll remain like that whether this will continue is even more unsure uncertain...
"Smelt Syriet bars"


Original text, in case my proposed edits muddle it up too much:

4.2 (Tempa's tent):
"I do pretty well down here, there is enough water in the damp cave systems and I kill the dinosaur for the meat their and precious scales and hides.
"Crafting a lot of scales and hide I learned how to create very powerfull Saurus armour, I began learning crafting hide using the bat hides."

4.7:
""The lava is hot enough to smelt various ores into bars, it is although too hot for bronze.
"Smelt iron bars
"Smelt steel bars
"Smelt gold bars

"The current circumstances at this location are perfect to smelt platina.
"In this environment it costs you 8 platina ore, 6 gold ore and 4 coal ore to create one platina bar.
"The costs could differ if the environment changes, but it has been stable so far...
"Smelt platina bars

"The conditions are even well enough for Syriet! But if this'll remain like that is even more unsure...
"Smelt Syriet bars"


...and the edited text without the original:

4.2 (Tempa's tent):
"I do pretty well down here; there is enough water in the damp cave systems and I kill the dinosaurs for their meat and precious scales and hides.
"Crafting a lot of scales and hides, I learned how to create very powerful Saurus armour; I began learning to craft hide using the bat hides."

4.7:
""The lava is hot enough to smelt various ores into bars, although it is too hot for bronze.
"Smelt iron bars
"Smelt steel bars
"Smelt gold bars

"The current circumstances at this location are perfect to smelt platina.
"In this environment it costs you 8 platina ore, 6 gold ore and 4 coal ore to create one platina bar.
"The cost could change if the environment changes, but it has been stable so far...
"Smelt platina bars

"The conditions are even adequate for Syriet! But whether this will continue is even more uncertain...
"Smelt Syriet bars"

Edited on 24-11-2012 13:32
Letedy
[AFK]
17-12-2012 14:39


You find a warrior sobbing at the training grounds...talk to him.

Hello Letedy,
I was a well known warrior once...I was the most feared fighter in the Outlands..
But it has all changed after I ruled the outlands for 3 months. A group of people combined their powers to kill me when I was working in the Outlands. They succeeded because I did not even notice them attacking me in my back.
I am sure my stuff is still around in the Outlands. The people who attacked me are rich enough to buy beter equipment, they only wanted revenge.
Could you please return me my armour and weapon ?

Shouldn't the second 'Outlands' have a capital letter?
And the last two sentences. Isn't 'better' spelt wrong?
And 'me my armour' doesn't make any sense to me.
JackGrimm
[Fangz]
17-12-2012 14:53



^ and added to that
They succeeded because I did not even notice them attacking me in my back.
You merely adopted the lag, I was born with it!
Poobgloob
[Wild]
18-12-2012 07:59



I think the last part of that should be
"Could you please return to me my armour and weapon ?"

but i dunno, I could be wrong >.>

Edited on 18-12-2012 08:00
"Maybe this world is another planet's Hell."
-Anonymous
JackGrimm
[Fangz]
18-12-2012 12:39



There is 31450 Cooked Pike, 527 Pike and 31917 Wood in the stockhouse. left.

Get rod if the 1st .
You merely adopted the lag, I was born with it!
meangreen
[GUARD]
23-12-2012 16:59


Hello,

I am currently smithing Iron Legs. In the manual they say I get 19 EXP per smith. At this time I have only been receiving 16 experience. Thought I would let you know.

Thanks
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