Kirokithikis 14-07-2007 08:49 | its called working graveyard shift at a group-home - if its quiet there's nothing to do |
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Eaglestar 14-07-2007 08:57 | Veeery Nice post! There are 'Friends' who destroy each other, but a real Friend sticks closer than a Brother. -Proverbs 18'24 Eaglestar Unite Force Police Sergeant |
vilsonia 14-07-2007 16:52 | That was great! |
Kirokithikis 27-07-2007 16:54 | glad you guys liked it. Started Chapter 5, should take me a week or so to finish |
master-paras 28-07-2007 14:47 | How long did it take u 2 type dat in?! took me ages reading it! Edited on 18-08-2007 13:51 |
dixierose 02-08-2007 18:37 | hope chapter 5 is done soon can't wait to read it |
Sargaas 21-08-2007 19:38 | Loved the story but when's the next chapter coming out? |
spiritflame 21-08-2007 20:17 | wow thats awsome |
Luna 21-08-2007 20:45 | Hmm yeah, i am wondering about that too, let me poke him... [3]20:38 Drummer[Lair]: quote: my 6 years old kid asked me "religion? is that a legendary pokemon?" |
esnow 01-09-2007 17:17 | I don't like it. Have your characters talk more to imply the stuff that is going on. It's kinda boring to read descriptions of stuff for lots of pages. |
NateHarper 20-09-2007 03:13 | Kiro thats a quality story, im gutted that ive reached the end!! |
balighrey 03-10-2007 05:08 | i just remembered those Syrnia's Stories by TIW..i dont know where is it now or someone have compiled it or is their any Chapters being added..hmmmmm ~bali~ |
Coneja 03-10-2007 07:33 | 3 months later and no chapter 5?? Currently: PVT in the Army National Guard After BCT and AIT, possible PV2 or PFC. Ship-off to BCT on October 18 Will be at Fort Leonardwood, Missouri for 19 weeks Will return home in March |
LeKit 03-10-2007 11:18 | keep at it, when you feel like writing it will all come together. Would be nice if Mod stickied this , You got a talent ,don't waste it. Love me or hate me I don't care,treat me right and I play fair,treat me wrong and you will find another side thats not so kind. http://www.ntrino.com/dogsoftheseas/ |
Coneja 03-10-2007 16:56 | lol Ami, it is stickied Currently: PVT in the Army National Guard After BCT and AIT, possible PV2 or PFC. Ship-off to BCT on October 18 Will be at Fort Leonardwood, Missouri for 19 weeks Will return home in March |
Akkarin 26-10-2007 20:13 | dam nice story there sorry for not reading it earlier, but since when did a CL of 22 become a bouncer? XD id much rather have been known for notorious tree chopping or land lubbing, but still, im in there |
randomhippo 09-12-2007 12:44 | great story mate. its one of the best i read. u need to write more as this keeps me sain for a few extra minutes a day lol. randomhippo |
doggiepaws10 21-03-2008 06:20 | I might be new but that is cool! |
crazyjonny [KRT] 24-03-2008 20:36 | AMAZING story makes me wanna be a pirate even more i already have the keg lol. but wow u should be a writer it was a simply awesome story someone plz message me when next pirate raid is thx. Edited on 24-03-2008 20:37 |
Luna [Lair] 24-03-2008 22:29 | Hmm... *gives everyone pompons* Come on, get him to write some more Cheer away! [1]10:23 Gods_Messenger[*TF*]: i let him beat on me just cuz i know he cuddles when hes done :P |
Guinn300 [~DEK~] 24-03-2008 23:13 | Thats kool I liked it. |
windsong 25-03-2008 03:57 | very cool inclusion of Syrnia history and modern song |
Connorian [Fate] 25-03-2008 04:01 | Hey Kiro (If ya' don't mind me callin' ya' that), when are the other chapters comin' out? I think ya' oughta' write a book 'er somthin'! This was a GREAT STORY! I am one of those who likes to read, and this made the time fly while I was fishin'. |
crazyjonny [KRT] 25-03-2008 16:17 | you really should write another chapter when you can. i dont want the story to end this early |
Luna [Lair] 26-03-2008 00:45 | Great job on the new chapter hun, looking forward to reading the 6th [1]10:23 Gods_Messenger[*TF*]: i let him beat on me just cuz i know he cuddles when hes done :P |