Kirokithikis
14-07-2007 08:49
| its called working graveyard shift at a group-home - if its quiet there's nothing to do |
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Mr. Addy
Keeping this game free by adding ads to every topic |
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Eaglestar
14-07-2007 08:57
| Veeery Nice post!
There are 'Friends' who destroy each other,
but a real Friend sticks closer than a Brother.
-Proverbs 18'24
Eaglestar
Unite Force
Police Sergeant |
vilsonia
14-07-2007 16:52
| That was great! |
Kirokithikis
27-07-2007 16:54
| glad you guys liked it. Started Chapter 5, should take me a week or so to finish |
master-paras
28-07-2007 14:47
| How long did it take u 2 type dat in?! took me ages reading it!
Edited on 18-08-2007 13:51 |
dixierose
02-08-2007 18:37
| hope chapter 5 is done soon can't wait to read it .gif) |
Sargaas
21-08-2007 19:38
| Loved the story but when's the next chapter coming out? |
spiritflame
21-08-2007 20:17
| wow thats awsome |
Luna
21-08-2007 20:45
| Hmm yeah, i am wondering about that too, let me poke him...
[3]20:38 Drummer[Lair]: quote: my 6 years old kid asked me "religion? is that a legendary pokemon?" |
esnow
01-09-2007 17:17
| I don't like it. Have your characters talk more to imply the stuff that is going on. It's kinda boring to read descriptions of stuff for lots of pages. |
NateHarper
20-09-2007 03:13
| Kiro thats a quality story, im gutted that ive reached the end!! |
balighrey
03-10-2007 05:08
| i just remembered those Syrnia's Stories by TIW..i dont know where is it now or someone have compiled it or is their any Chapters being added..hmmmmm
~bali~ |
Coneja
03-10-2007 07:33
| 3 months later and no chapter 5??
Currently: PVT in the Army National Guard
After BCT and AIT, possible PV2 or PFC.
Ship-off to BCT on October 18
Will be at Fort Leonardwood, Missouri for 19 weeks
Will return home in March |
LeKit
03-10-2007 11:18
| keep at it, when you feel like writing it will all come together. Would be nice if Mod stickied this , You got a talent ,don't waste it.
Love me or hate me I don't care,treat me right and I play fair,treat me wrong and you will find another side thats not so kind.
http://www.ntrino.com/dogsoftheseas/ |
Coneja
03-10-2007 16:56
| lol Ami, it is stickied
Currently: PVT in the Army National Guard
After BCT and AIT, possible PV2 or PFC.
Ship-off to BCT on October 18
Will be at Fort Leonardwood, Missouri for 19 weeks
Will return home in March |
Akkarin
26-10-2007 20:13
| dam nice story there sorry for not reading it earlier, but since when did a CL of 22 become a bouncer? XD id much rather have been known for notorious tree chopping or land lubbing, but still, im in there  |
randomhippo
09-12-2007 12:44
| great story mate. its one of the best i read. u need to write more as this keeps me sain for a few extra minutes a day lol.
randomhippo |
doggiepaws10
21-03-2008 06:20
| I might be new but that is cool!  |
crazyjonny
[KRT]
24-03-2008 20:36
| AMAZING story makes me wanna be a pirate even more i already have the keg lol.
but wow u should be a writer it was a simply awesome story
someone plz message me when next pirate raid is thx.
Edited on 24-03-2008 20:37 |
Luna
[Lair]
24-03-2008 22:29
| Hmm... *gives everyone pompons*
Come on, get him to write some more .gif)
Cheer away! 
[1]10:23 Gods_Messenger[*TF*]: i let him beat on me just cuz i know he cuddles when hes done :P |
Guinn300
[~DEK~]
24-03-2008 23:13
| Thats kool I liked it. .gif) |
windsong
25-03-2008 03:57
| very cool inclusion of Syrnia history and modern song |
Connorian
[Fate]
25-03-2008 04:01
| Hey Kiro (If ya' don't mind me callin' ya' that), when are the other chapters comin' out? I think ya' oughta' write a book 'er somthin'! This was a GREAT STORY! I am one of those who likes to read, and this made the time fly while I was fishin'. |
crazyjonny
[KRT]
25-03-2008 16:17
| you really should write another chapter when you can. i dont want the story to end this early  |
Luna
[Lair]
26-03-2008 00:45
| Great job on the new chapter hun, looking forward to reading the 6th
[1]10:23 Gods_Messenger[*TF*]: i let him beat on me just cuz i know he cuddles when hes done :P |
